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#1 Losing It

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Posted 10 May 2013 - 06:09 PM

Chapter 1

 

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I heard the doorbell and two voices. One of them was my mom, but I didn't recognize the other. "Who is it, mom?" I asked and my mom and a girl came out of the house. "It's our new neighbor, Alexandra" She was the most beautiful girl I've ever seen. "Hi, I'm Alexandra" she said and waved. "I'm Niall" I said and regret it ammediatly. Her giggling were so cute. "Well, it was nice to meet you, but I have to go now" Alexandra said. "Ok, it was nice to meet you to love" I answered. My mom walked her to the door and when the door shut, my mom start with the dinner.

 

 

 

I know it's not long, because this is my first story. And I would like if you guys saved the rude and mean things for yourself.



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Posted 10 May 2013 - 06:11 PM

I love it. It's amaZayn. Plz post more soon

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#3 Losing It

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Posted 10 May 2013 - 06:24 PM

Thank you, that means alot to me.
I'll try to post more, the only probem is that I don't have a computer that is my own, but I'll try

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Posted 10 May 2013 - 07:09 PM

Post more!!


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#5 Losing It

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Posted 10 May 2013 - 07:21 PM

I'm working on it. It's just that I new a this site and maybe one of you guys could help me, because I really don't know how to continue without start a new fanfic.

I hope you maybe can help



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Posted 10 May 2013 - 08:55 PM

It's good so far. And you don't need to start a new topic, you can post the same way you post comments! :)

If i let you know i'm here for you

Maybe you'll love yourself like i love you.

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i've lost myself. idunno what i'm doing anymore. i promised myself i would never be that girl, but i guess some promises were meant to be broken. i wanna stop hiding. i want someone to listen, to hold me close and tell me everything will be okay. i just wanna go back to being the girl that didn't care. i wanna go back to being the that wouldn't pick at her skin, the girl who wouldn't hit her arm to make the pain go away. i wanna love myself again….

 


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Posted 10 May 2013 - 09:02 PM

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#8 Losing It

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Posted 10 May 2013 - 10:22 PM

Thanks for the help
I'll post more in the morning

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Posted 11 May 2013 - 07:44 AM

Chapter 2

Alexandra's pov

His mom is very nice, but the boy is adorable, funny and cute. I think he's a little shy and concerned about something. His name is Niall and he has this little cute irish accent and an amazing smile. I know that my mom is gonna be worried if I don't go home soon. "Well, it was nice to meet you, but I have to go now" I said. Niall came over to me and said ' OK, it was nice to meet you to" he said and came over to and kissed my hand. I was blushing really hard and I giggled a little. His mom followed me to the door and we said goodbye and I left.


Sry that it's not long and good
It sucks I know

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Posted 11 May 2013 - 03:51 PM

Hey, I just want you to know that I would if you" guys could check out my poetry and say what think. It's called "the way out of darkness



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