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#41 Maximum Ride

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Posted 21 February 2013 - 02:57 PM

Soon! But not now!! >:)


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Posted 21 February 2013 - 03:00 PM

Ahhhhhh bang * fell down the stairs while yelling ahh and trying to get away from the clown*

im hurting. but no one knows. im drowning but no one can save me. im dying and no one cares.


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Posted 21 February 2013 - 03:19 PM

haha hey guys you have to watch the video under one way or another on here. It made me cry seeing zayn cry :'(

http://www.dailymail...id-Cameron.html


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Posted 21 February 2013 - 03:25 PM

I've watched it before and it is actually where I got the idea for my fanfic life or death

im hurting. but no one knows. im drowning but no one can save me. im dying and no one cares.


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Posted 21 February 2013 - 03:28 PM

It's soooo sad :'(


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Posted 21 February 2013 - 07:31 PM

After a little while, Anne left, leaving me in charge of the shop. We hadn't had very many customers so I decide to start to stock the shelves. As I am refilling the jelly bean jars, I hear the bell on door jingle. I turn around just to see Harry walk in the door with the rest of the boys behind him. "I told you I would bring them by!" Harry says with a wink. I can't manage to say anything but I'm saved by Lou. "'Ello love! I'm Louis but you probably all ready know that." He says with his signature smile. "Whats yours?" "Uhh..." Is all I manage to get out. "It's Katie." Harry says, thankfully saving me. Wow, I've been saved twice now. I can't believe I'm with the one direction, talking to the louis tomlinson, well not really talking, more stuttering. But I'm talking to my biggest celeb crush and all I can say is uh. "KATIE!!" Liam yells. "Wha, huh?" I say confused. "We've been calling your name for a long while now love" Niall explains, cracking up. "Oops" I say with an embarrassed blush. "I guess I'm just nervous!"

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Posted 21 February 2013 - 08:41 PM

nice

and lol 2 the pic

u probably shouldnt let them get around candy tho. theyll b  bouncing off the walls


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Posted 21 February 2013 - 09:11 PM

haha you got that right, Caitlyn!  Post more soon!


Fave quotes from my concert in Louisville:

It feels great to have me own 'Ville! ~Louis on having a city "named after him" (I'm pretty sure Louisville was named after a different Louis lln)

The three things I love most about Kentucky are: (1) the chicken, (2) the chicken, and (3)...*long pause* ALL OF YOU GUYS! ~Zayn

 

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Harry *to Caroline, the girl with the broken arm*: How did you fall?

Caroline: I fell funny.

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Posted 21 February 2013 - 09:39 PM

I really like this. Plz post more soon.

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Posted 21 February 2013 - 11:02 PM

I'm at a friends house right now so I probably won't be posting any more tonight! sorry guys! :(


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Posted 21 February 2013 - 11:03 PM

nice

and lol 2 the pic

u probably shouldnt let them get around candy tho. theyll b  bouncing off the walls

haha well you never know ;)


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Posted 21 February 2013 - 11:15 PM

oh trust me

they will

especially louis, since hes already hyper.


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Posted 22 February 2013 - 12:26 AM

Luv the fanfic and my school has laptops and iPads and were in Canada

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Posted 22 February 2013 - 12:35 AM

im hungry


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Posted 22 February 2013 - 12:41 AM

Me too...I'm always hungry


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Posted 22 February 2013 - 12:46 AM

haha just like Niall! lln


Fave quotes from my concert in Louisville:

It feels great to have me own 'Ville! ~Louis on having a city "named after him" (I'm pretty sure Louisville was named after a different Louis lln)

The three things I love most about Kentucky are: (1) the chicken, (2) the chicken, and (3)...*long pause* ALL OF YOU GUYS! ~Zayn

 

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Harry *to Caroline, the girl with the broken arm*: How did you fall?

Caroline: I fell funny.

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Posted 22 February 2013 - 12:47 AM

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Posted 22 February 2013 - 01:03 AM

All of the boys burst out laughing, and I see Niall fall to the floor. I blush really hard and try and help Niall regain control of himself. "Why are you all laughing?" I ask, trying to laugh myself. "Of corse your nervous love!" Lou says with a laugh. "Your meeting the most famous boy band in the world!" I giggle at his comment, and catch Harry staring at me. I blush and look away. "What you staring at there Hazza?" Zayn asks with a smile. "Nothhhinnnggg...." Harry says, obviously embarrassed. I blush again and look at the time. It's almost 4 and if I'm not home by 4:30, John is bound to get mad. "Hey, Harry is there anyway you can take over?" I ask, still feeling nervous about being late. "Yeah love, Is everything alright." He asks with a concerned look on his face. "Yeah, I'm fine!" I say, faking a smile. "Katie, can I talk to you in privet?" Lou ask, being serious for once in his life. "Yeah!" I say surprised. We walk outside together and Lou turns around and places his hands on my shoulders. "Are you sure everything is alright?" He asks. I'm surprised at his worry for me, especially since we just met. "Yeah, I'm sure!" I say. When really it wasn't.

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Posted 22 February 2013 - 01:05 AM

I don't just like it... I love it! It's great

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Posted 22 February 2013 - 01:05 AM

OF CORASE WE LIKE IT!!!!! More more

im hurting. but no one knows. im drowning but no one can save me. im dying and no one cares.



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