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#1 Niall_Crazy

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Posted 20 February 2013 - 01:51 AM

So this is my first fanfic..hope you guys like it!!! :D

 

Chapter One

 

 

My POV 
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I was running down the street. He's catching up to me. I got to get away. I turned down an ally way hoping to lose him. I took a quick look behind me. Cost clear, for now. 
I ran into some one. 
"I...uhhh oh..uh sorry I was in uhh rush, yeah rush." I said. 
"It's alright love" A fimilar voice said. 
I looked up to see I ran into Louis Tomlison from One Direction. He was with the other boys. 
"Where are you headed we could drive you." Niall said with his cute irish accent. 
I took another look behind me. Cost still clear. 
"Oh no I uhh I can walk uhh I'll be fine." I said, looking behind me again. 
They all seemed concerened. I was constanly looking over my shoulder. 
"You alright..?" Harry asked. 
"I uhh yeah." I quickly said. 
I looked behind me again. 
He. Was. Coming. 
"I uhh I have to go." I said, running away. 
"Wait!" Niall yelled after me. I heard his voice but couldn't make you the words. 
I turned the corner. Crap. Dead end. I am toast. Jason came around the corner. I froze with fear. 
"No where to hind now Hallie."  
"Please.." I traile off. 
He grabbed my arm and pulled me close, whispering in my ear. "I have you now, come with me or I'll shoot." 
A rush of fear come over me. He has a gun. Niall came around the corner with a concerned look on his face. I heard Jason swear under his breath. 
"Every thing alright?" Niall asked. 
I didn't dare say anything. 
"Yeah, we were just playing tag. Gotcha." He laughed pulling me into a hug. I forced my self to act like we were....I can't even say it....together. I faced Niall his face still full of conceren. I mouth the word help. He nodded. 
"Ok, well have a nice day." He said turning the corner. 
Jason took a grib of my arm and twisted it. 
"Who the hell was that?!?" He asked. 
"I..I..don't know.." I trailed off. 
He twisted my arm harder. 
"Yes you do." He said stearnly. 
"I ran into him when I was running.." I said. 
Jason felt like he was going to twist my arm off. I winced in pain.

 

Niall POV 
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I can hear them, I think he is hurting her. Why was she running and why did she mouth 'help' to me. I don't know but I'm going to help her. I heard him say "Now, we are going to walk out of this ally and you are going to act like my girlfriend." Why was he forcing her..? They came around the corner and I punched the guy in the face, knocking him over. The girl looked at me with gladness in her eyes. She grabbed my hand and ran. We ran to the other boys. We stopped only for a second to explain. 
"Ok lets go. Get in the car." Zayn said motioning us towards where it was parked. 
We got in and the girl looked as if she would start crying. She was all shaken up. I put my arm around her and she leaned on me. I could tell she was trying to not cry infront of 5 guys. She was trying to be strong.

 

My POV 
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I was so scare how had he found me? I have been to 7 other countries and died my hair 4 times. I let it go my natrual color here in London because I thought I had lost him. Niall put his arm around me. Making me want to cry even more. I tried to hold back the tears, I didn't want to make a fool of my self. I let a tear drop. Niall whiped it away. He was so sweet. 
"So, who was that?" Louis asked after a while. Liam punched him. 
"H-he is my ex..." I said. 
Niall began to stroke my hair gentally, sending tingles throut my entire body. Wait no. I can't like him...He wouldn't want a mess like me. 
"He wants to get me back weather I like it or not. I have been runnning from him ever sence we broke up. N-Now he found me..." I explained. I let another tear fall. 
"Why don't you stay the night with us love?" Louis suggested. 
"I couldn't..I can just go home..." I said. 
"No what if he finds you." Liam sternly said. 
"Well...I-I dont know..you guys don't mind do you..?" I asked. 
"Nope." They all said. 
"Thanks.." I said leaning on Niall. 
We drove to their hotel.



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Posted 20 February 2013 - 01:54 AM

awwwwww

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Posted 20 February 2013 - 02:57 AM

thanks  :P



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Posted 20 February 2013 - 03:17 AM

Chapter 2

My POV 
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I layed in Nialls arm all the way to the hotel. I felt safe in his arms. ARG! Stop thinking like that. I can't like him... 
We pulled up into the parking lot and got out. I cautiously looked over my shoulder every so often. 
"It's ok, your safe with us." Niall said rubbing my arm. 
I managed a small smile. He was so sweet. 
We walked in to the boys room. I realized I didn't bring anything. I only had my purse and my phone. 
"Where should she sleep?" Louis asked. 
"She can sleep in my bed, I'll sleep on the floor." Niall said. 
"No, I can sleep on the floor." I said. 
"It's fine, I insist." He said. 
"Ok...thanks." I said. 
Niall walked into his room and back out with a really big t-shirt. He handed it to me. 
"Thanks." I said taking them. 
I want over to the bathroom and changed. I came out with it on. The boys whistled. I punched them. 
"Thanks again." I said sitting next to Niall. 
"No problem." Each of them said. 
Louis turned on the TV and flipped through channles.

Niall POV 
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Hallie was sitting next to me! I didn't know what to do or say. I got really nervous. I was starting to like her. I mean how wouldn't her hazel eyes were amazing, her long blonde hair drapped over her shoulders beautifuly. She was perfect. I never really belived in love at first sight but now I do. 
There was a creek in the kitchen she grabbed my arm and looked over to where the noise came from. I wrapped my arm around her, trying to give confort. She was really tense. Slowly she began to ease and sit back. 
She curled up into a ball in my chest.

My POV 
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I layed on Nialls chest and I could hear his steadly heart beat. I slowly began to fade into sleep. I caught my self and sat up. 
"I'm going to go to bed." I said. 
"Me too." Zayn, Liam and Niall chimed in. 
I waked over into Nialls room, Niall folowing behind me. 
"I really can sleep on the floor." I said. 
"Nah, you take the bed I will be fine." He said. 
I crawled into his bed. It was a big enough bed for two people. 
"Niall your going to freeze." I said. 
"I'm fine really." Niall replied. 
"Just get in the bed." I said. 
"You sure..?" Niall asked. 
"Niall Horan get in the bed before I change my mind." I said. 

Niall crawled in next to me. I wanted to feel safe again, so i went and snuggled into Niall. He wrapped his arms around me. I feel safe again. i haven't felt that in a while. 
"Night love." Was the last thing I heard Niall say before I slipped into sleep. 



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Posted 20 February 2013 - 03:18 AM

Chapter 3

My POV 
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I woke up. Niall was gone. I sat up slowly and looked around. I heard the boys out side.

"You just met her and you have alread slept with her??!" Louis exclaimed. 
"Calm down Lou, nothing happened." Niall said with a bit a annoyance in his voice. 
"You sure mate?" Harry said, teasingy. 
"Shut up you guys! What if she is awake??" Niall said. 
"Good. NIALLS GOT A CRU-" Louis exclaimed but was cut off. 
I laughed to my self and got up. When I opened the door Niall and Louis were wrestling on the ground. 
"Morning love." Liam said. 
"How did you sleep." Harry said, wiggling his eyebrows. 
"Shut up." I said jokingly punching him. 
I sat down on the couch next to Zayn. 
"Morning Hallie." He said. 
I yawned, "Morning." 
Louis and Niall finally broke up. Niall came and sat on the other side of me, looking a little bit embarrassed. I smiled at him and he smiled back. 
There was a knock at the door. I jumped and grabbed Niall. My heart speed up. Harry got up to go see who it was. It was Paul. I relaxed a little. 
"Alright boys we have to go back home." Harry said coming back. 
"Home...?" I asked. Who was going to protect me? 
"Theres a house in London that we're going to." Liam explained. 
"You can come stay." Louis said. 
I really wanted to. They made me feel safe. Niall made me feel safe...stop thinking that!! 
"Oh on, I can go home." I said. 
"We can't risk letting him catch you again." Niall said. 
"He probably doesn't know where I live.." I replied. 
"No, your coming with us. I can't risk losing you." Niall realized what he said and blushed. 
I smiled. Maybe he did like me...



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Posted 20 February 2013 - 03:20 AM

Chapter 4

My POV 
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We drove to my house to pick up my stuff. I layed in Nialls arms all the way there. 
As soon as I walked in there was stuff every where, broken, stolen, and so much more. I cussed under my breath. 
"Hurry get your stuff." Niall said concerened. 
I went to my room to grab my suit case and cloths. I opened the door and found my best friend on the ground, unconsious, and beat. She was ducked taped every where. She had bruses every where. 
"BETH!!" I screamed running over to her. 
She sturred but didn't wake up. Tears filled my eyes. There was a note next to her.

Next time it’s death. 
xx Jason

"NIALL!!" I screamed completely in tears. 
He rushed in along with the other boys. Niall pulled me into his chest. 
"Grab your stuff and lets go." He whispered in my ear. 
I shakily got up and grabbed my suit case throwing my stuff into it. Zayn picked up Beth bridial style. 
Louis drove us to the hospital. The doctors immediatly took her in and did a cheak up. She was ok, but really beaten. 
I walked into her room. 
"Hey, how are you feeling." I asked. 
She looked at me. "Been better." She said. 
I walked over and sat next to her. 
"I'm sorry..." I said. 
"No it's not your fault." She said. 
I was my fault. All of this. 
"Did the doctor say any thing about hilusinations..?" Beth asked. 
"Uh, no why..?" I asked. 
"Cause I swear I saw One Direction." She said. 
"Well...you kinda sorta did..." I trailed off. 
"OMG...." Was all she could come up with. 
Niall walked in and came over to me. Beth was completely star struck. He wrapped his arm around me and Beth looked as if she was going to explode. 
"Go get Zayn." I whispered to Niall. He looked confused but did any way. Zayn had always been her favorite. Zayn walked in and asked, "How are you feeling?" Beth staired at him wide eyed. 
"I have felt better" She said. 
I smiled. Louis called Zayn for a minute. Leaving us alone. Beth looked over at me and asked, "So you and Niall eh'?" I laughed. 
"No.." I said. 
"Really, he walked straight over to you." She said. 
"Well erm he hasn't asked me or any thing like that.." I said. 
"You two would be so cute together!!" She yelled really super loud. 
The door was open so I am positive Niall heard that.

Niall POV 
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"You two would be so cute together!!" I heard Hallies' friend yell. I thought a minute and she ment us. Should I ask her? Now is not the best time... Louis came over and jabbed my in the ribbs. 
"You two would make such a cute couple!" Louis yelled. I bet she heard that...

My POV 
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"You two would make such a cute couple!" I heard Louis yell. 
"THANK YOU SOME ONE WHO AGREES!!!" Beth yelled out the door. I was getting really hot and freaking out. Louis came back in holding Niall. Freak. Freak. Freak. Freak. He was going to ask me two be his girlfriend. I. Am. Freaking. Out. Louis shoved Niall towards me. 
"Well..erm this isn't the best.. erm time...but uhh...you...well..would you um like to erm be my girlfriend..." Niall said. 
"Yes!" I exclaimed jumping into his arms. The boys came around the corner and cheered. Beth did too. Beth and Louis high fived. 
We backed away and Niall staired at me with those beautiful blue eyes and I found my self leaning in. His soft lips met mine. Butterflies exploded inside of me. We backed away and smiled. 
The doctor came in and told us Beth can come home tonight. 
On the car ride home me and Niall held hands and I caught Zayn looking at Beth a few times. 
"So..where are we going...?" Beth asked. 
"Back to our flat." Louis said. 
"Oh, well I can go home." 
"No, he could get you again." I said. 
"Really I can go home." She said. 
"Nope you have no choice, your my best friend, my only friend. I can't lose you." I said. 
"Fine, but only cause I love you Hallie." She said and winked at Niall. 
"OHH SNAP!!" Louis yelled. 
We stopped by her house and let her grab her stuff. Zayn went inside to help her.



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Posted 20 February 2013 - 03:20 AM

Chapter 5

My POV 
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We walked into their house. It was HUGE! There was room for an army, at least. Me and Beth were struck at how big the house was. 
"Well we only have one guest room, so its it ok if you two share?" Liam asked. 
"Yeah." I said, still admiring the huge house. 
They showed us to our room. A house this big and only one guest room? What ever. 
"Holy crap, this house it huge!" Beth said sitting on the bed. 
"I know, and only one guest room?" I said/asked. 
"Haha yeah I thought that too!" She said. 
We started to put our stuff away. 
"So, you and Niall?" She asked again. 
"Yeah.." I smiled, realizing I was his girlfriend. 
"OMG you two are so cute!!" She screamed. 
"Thanks." I said. 
"Now just set me up with Zayn." She said winking. 
There was a knock at the door. 
"YEAH?" I asked. 
It was Zayn. Beth blushed insanely. I laughed at her. 
"Hey, erm there is pizza down stairs." Zayn said. 
"K, we'll be down soon." I said. 
I winked at Beth. She punched me. 
"Arg, could I have made a bigger fool of myself?" She said burring her face into the pillow. 
"Well-" I was cut off, she threw a pillow at me. 
"Ok, ok lets go get some food. I'm hungry." I said getting up to walk out. Beth followed. The pizza was half way gone. What would you expect with five guys? I grabbed a piece and sat next to Niall on the floor.

Beth POV 
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I grabbed a piece of pizza and scanned the room for a seat. There was one next to Zayn. No don't. I had a mental war with myself. Do it. No, don't DO IT! NO!! Ug, I gave up and sat next to Hallie.

My POV 
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Beth sat next to me. 
"Go sit next to him!" I loudly whispered to her. 
"No! Shut up!" She loudly whispered back. 
We realized every one was stairing at us. Great, Zayn heard us. They ALL heard us. Great. Beth sorta blushed. I sat there super embarassed. 
"So.." I said breaking the silence. 
Every one looked back and forth between Zayn and Beth. 
"You two would be cute together!!" Louis exclamed. 
Beth continued to blush. Zayn smiled, and looked at the ground. 
"Acward..." Harry said. 
"Yeah.." We all agreed. 
"Hey lets watch a movie!!" Liam suggested. 
"PITCH PERFECT!!" Louis screamed. 
"NO!! PARANORMAL ACTIVITY!!" Niall screamed. 
"NOO!!! TOY STORY!!!" Liam screamed. 
They argued a while. 
"SHUT UP!!" Beth yelled, making the room go dead silent. 
All eyes were on her. 
"Uh erm uh just wanted you guys to stop argueing..." She said. 
"Ok, if you guys are going to act like childeren then lets decide like childeren. PUT YOUR FEET IN!!" I yelled. 
We played 'mickey mouse peed on a house, what color was it?' 
It was Niall and Louis left. I crossed my fingers for Louis to win. I didn't want to watch a horror movie. 
Crap. Niall won. 
"YESS!!!" He pumped his fist in the air. 
He poped the movie in and sat down. 
"Wait! I got to got to the bathroom!" Beth said running away. 
"WRONG WAY LOVE!" Louis yelled after her. 
I ran to go find her. Found her. 
"Wrong way silly." I said grabbing her arm. 
"Yeah I noticed after I walked all the way down there." She said. 
I pulled her back to where every one else was. 
"Wait I have'nt peed." She said in protest. 
"Lou where is your bathroom?" I asked 
"Down that other way." The said pointing down the hall. 
"K thanks." She said. 
I went with her to talk to her about Zayn. 
"I wont get lost." She said. 
"No, I wanted to talk.." I said. 
"About what...?" She asked. 
"About Zayn. Just go freaking sit next to him." I said. 
"You can't just go sit by Zayn Malik." She responded. 
"Yes you can!" I said. 
We found the bathroom. 
"Fine what ever. I can find my way back! Now leave me to pee." She said walking in. 
I laughed and walked back to where the boys were. 
I sat next to Niall. He messed with my hair sending tingles through out my body. I was so glad he asked me to be his girlfriend. 
Beth came back I gave her a look that said 'you better sit by that boy or I'm going to kill you' She gave me a look that said 'fine! but i hate you so freaking much' 
She sat next to Zayn. 
I did a small happy dance with myself. Niall started the movie. I scooted closer to him. Gosh I hate him for doing this to me. The movie was scary! I burried my face in Niall chest most of the time. I could see Beth hiding in Zayn. Aw so cute. 
The movie finally ended. We all sat there, scared. Acupt Niall. That was like his favorite movie. 
"Well I am not going to be able to sleep tonight." Beth said sitting up. 
"Me neather." I added, sitting up as well. 
"I'll keep you safe." Niall said pulling me back in. 
I smiled at him. 
We kissed. Fireworks.



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Posted 20 February 2013 - 03:21 AM

AWESOME!


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Posted 20 February 2013 - 03:26 AM

and wait,WHAT was the game called they played to see which movie be choosen?


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Posted 20 February 2013 - 03:28 AM

Love it
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Posted 20 February 2013 - 03:31 AM

thumbs up tho


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Posted 20 February 2013 - 03:31 AM

Mickey mouse peed on a house
I <3 all my 1D lovin' BFF's

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Posted 20 February 2013 - 03:33 AM

okay....im not weirded out at all

lol

it was weird. and funny. i cracked up laughing and then remembered that my dad didnt kno i was on the computer, so i shut up


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Posted 20 February 2013 - 03:39 AM

lol thanks guys!! :D :D



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Posted 20 February 2013 - 03:39 AM

Lol
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Posted 20 February 2013 - 03:42 AM

make them play truth or dare!!!


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Posted 20 February 2013 - 03:52 AM

OM-to the-G!!!!! This is good! And girl you just kept posting one chapter after another! Dang your good! Post more soon love! :)

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Posted 20 February 2013 - 03:53 AM

lol!

mannnnn, im tired

but still chatty

 

and i was reading one of louis's tweets and it said 'more tattoos' or something really close to dat

no more tattoos louis! ur fine enough!


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Posted 20 February 2013 - 03:53 AM

OM-to the-G!!!!! This is good! And girl you just kept posting one chapter after another! Dang your good! Post more soon love! :)

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Posted 20 February 2013 - 03:56 AM

I saw that tweet too since I follow him of course

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