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Posted 23 February 2013 - 02:46 AM

I've read my carrot loving, stripe wearing superman. I Love it :)

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Posted 23 February 2013 - 03:50 AM

i want more dani



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Posted 23 February 2013 - 03:55 AM

more soon


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Posted 23 February 2013 - 08:16 PM

Kk.

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Posted 24 February 2013 - 04:06 AM

yay


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Posted 24 February 2013 - 01:31 PM

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Posted 24 February 2013 - 01:35 PM

more!


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Louis: O

Niall: A

Zayn: B

Harry: B

 

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Posted 24 February 2013 - 02:29 PM

Si, si, more

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Posted 24 February 2013 - 02:59 PM

Guy calm down I'm working on chapter 5 right now. :)

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Posted 24 February 2013 - 03:00 PM

YA!!!



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Posted 24 February 2013 - 04:08 PM

*doing happy dance*


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Posted 24 February 2013 - 06:13 PM

POST CHAPTER 5 NOW!!!!!!!


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Posted 24 February 2013 - 09:03 PM

Alright, alright calm down!!

Chapter 5 
Louis's P.O.V
We haven't seen Dani for over 3 hours, it was already 2:30am. Zoey had told us that she just needed some fresh air and that she would be back in 30 minutes but it had been more than 3 hours. The boys and I were starting to get worried, Zoey just looked calm. God how can she look calm when her best friend is out there  alone at midnight. Other than the look of calmness she also had a look on her face like she knew exactly what was going on. Harry also noticed.
"Okay spit it out Zoey" Harry said
"Spit what out" 
"The truth, where is Dani, why did she run away and who was that women and that little girl" Harry asked
"Okay look I don't know where she is, but I do know why she ran away and who that little girl and that women was, but the only thing that I can tell from all that is that that little girl was her and that women was her mom but other than that I can't say anything else" Zoey said.
"Well do you aleast know where she is" I asked
"Have you forgotten that we just moved to London today" Zoey flipped.
"Sheez, calm down we were just wondering and aleast show some worriedness" Niall said
"I kno..wait she once lived here in London when she was little, she told me how there was a specail place she liked to go but she never did tell me where the place was at or how it looked."
"Okay so knowing that info why don't we split up and go looking for her" I suggested
"Were in" the boys said
"I guess I'm in too, trust me the only reason I don't have a worried look on my face is because she does this aleast once every month, she needs fresh air sometimes and the maximum amount of time she is gone is only for about an hour, so yeah I'm freakin out in the inside" Zoey said.
With that we split up and left, Zoey went with Zayn, Niall went with Liam and Harry and I went by myself.

Danielle's P.O.V 
I've been gone for more than 3 hours now and I don't plan on going any time soon. It's cold but I don't care I don't wanna go back there, they are gonna be asking me questions and I'm not ready for that. I started wondering around the park until I realized that this was the park that me and my mom came to every weekend, this was our specail place, it was also mine and Louis specail place. I felt the teas coming again, god I'm such a baby. I don't wanna cry anymore, I want it to go back to Junior Year were it was Louis and I and I didn't cry, not once that year, if I did cry it was just tears of joy. He made me laugh, he made believe in love, he opened my eyes and helped me do the things I loved to do once again, but all that came crashing down when he was taken from me or more like when I was taken from him.I grabbed the notebook and began reading.

**October 20**
It was a Saturday morning and I didn't feel like doing anything. It was one of those days where you just felt lazy and didn't feel like doing crap. Unfortunelty it was clean-my-room day. 
** Scratch Scratch**
"The fudge"
** Scratch**
I grabbed the baseball bat from my closet and creeptd up to the door. I started opening the door when I heard that scratch sound.
"BOO" Louis screamed
I swung the baseball at his leg and he fell to the floor, I was about to hit him again when I noticed it was Louis.
"Damn Dani, you gotta calm down and OW" Louis screamed at me.
"THE BLOODY HELL LOUIS ARE YOU SERIOUSLY TELLING ME TO FUCKIN CALM DOWN WHEN YOU COULD HAVE KILLED ME, YOUR FREAKIN DOUCHE. SO DONT TELL ME TO CALM DOWN WHEN IT WAS YOUR FAULT, YOU LITTLE ASS!!!!"
"Damn why you gotta be soo mean"
"I'm not being mean, wait why are you here anyways" I asked him.
"Well my friends ditched me and I have no one to hang out with, so why not hang out with you"
"I don't wanna hang out with you, not after you scared the crap of me"
"I'm sorry but I just had to, it's my lifetime goal"
We just stare at eachother and began to crack up. After 3 good minutes of laughing we stopped.
"Why Louis" I ask with a serious look on my face.
"Why what" 
"Why are you so nice to me here but yet at school your like the devil's child" 
"Idunno, I guess people look at me as the toughest person and I guess I feel like I have prove it"
"But why me, why am I the only person you bully?"
"Danielle look I'm truly sorry for everything, I didn't mean for it to go as far where every body hates and don't wanna hang out with you. When I came here I guess I was under Donica's spell and when she told me to start bullying you I did it, after that  everyone saw me as a strong person and I liked that, but really I'm sorry"
"Don't worry about it I forgive you, now where shall we go" I ask
"Really are you actually agreeing to hang out with me, you high school bully" 
"Yeah, now shut up with this whole bullying thing and tell me where you wanna go"
"We shall go to..........SIX FLAGS!!!"
"Okay than six flags it is" 

**Back to reality**
"Thank god your okay" someone said above me, snapping me out the book. I look up to see Louis in front of me, I quickly shut the book.
"Ummm yeah" I say
"What were you reading?" 
"Nothin, just a book I bought earlier today" 
"Whats it about"
"It's about a boy and a girl and how they fall in love. They were assigned to do a project together and they have alot of adventures together but than the girls get taken away from her first true love"
When I finished telling him about it he looked like he was just stabbed in the heart. I quickly regretted it.
"Oh" was all he said
"Yup, Louis can we go now?"
"Ummm sure" he still look hurt, but why it wasn't like he remembered anything, or did he?


Any suggestions on what should happen in the next chapter, except Louis figuring out the truth.

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Posted 24 February 2013 - 09:08 PM

Need more NOW!!
sorry please

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Posted 24 February 2013 - 09:12 PM

She could tell some one besides Louis. I loved the chapter!

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Posted 24 February 2013 - 09:13 PM

Aww thanks and I was also thinking about that, I was thinking it should be Niall.

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Posted 24 February 2013 - 09:21 PM

That sounds like it would be really good!

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Posted 24 February 2013 - 09:24 PM

this is so amazing, you're a really great writer, i envy you. please post more soon!


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Posted 24 February 2013 - 10:57 PM

Thank you that means alot. Your a great writer too. :)
I'll try my best to get another chapter done by today.

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Posted 25 February 2013 - 12:09 AM

YAY!! *Happy Dance!!*


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