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#1 Liam_Crazy

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Posted 19 February 2013 - 01:47 AM

Hi Guys! Remember me????? Probably not, but anyways, I'm the author of Summer Love. http://6283-summer-l...am-payne-fanfic I'll probably update this fanfic more often.

 

 

Chapter 1

 

 I laid on the couch, bored as all heck. All of a sudden, a carrot hit me in the face. "Louis!" I sat up, throwing the carrot at my brother. The carrot hit him in the face.

 

 "Geez!" He yelled with a smile. "Since when did you have a good arm?"

 

 I laughed. "Since I made the volleyball team in 7th grade!" We were all seniors,but Louis, but I was the captain of the volleyball team.

 

 "Don't you have friends coming over?" Louis asked. He had the biggest crush on one of my friends, Bailey.

 

 "You only want Bailey to come over." I told him.

 

  "Not my fault she's hot, with a capital H." He retorted as the doorbell rang. I ran to the door, letting Allie, Beth, Hallie, and Bailey in.

 

 Bailey smiled as Louis walked in. She had a crush on Louis.

 

 "Hey girls. Hi Bailey." Louis smiled.

 

 "Hi Louis." Bailey smiled.

 

 "Oh, for Kevin's sake, why don't you two start dating already?" Allie shouted. Me, Hallie, and Beth started giggling.

 

 Bailey and Louis looked at eachother. "Ok," they shrugged.

 

 They dooorbell rang, and I opened the door to the rest of 1D. "Hey, guys!" I invited them in. As Niall, Zayn, and Harry walked in, we high-fived. But when Liam walked in, we did our secret hang shake that no one can figure out. That's why we call it secret.

 

 "Hey Ry-ry." Liam smiled. That was his nickname for me.

 

 "Hi Liam," I greeted. We all went to the basement and started playing the wii.

 

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How do you guys like it????? Leave comments below!



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Posted 19 February 2013 - 01:48 AM

gr8!!



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Posted 19 February 2013 - 02:02 AM

Thx!! I'll add some more soon!



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Posted 19 February 2013 - 02:07 AM

:)



#5 ms.littleniallhoran

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Posted 19 February 2013 - 02:10 AM

its briliant

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Posted 19 February 2013 - 02:11 AM

the_cheesenip_and_carrot is FANGIRLING FOR LOUIS AGAIN!!!

hehe, im talkin bout mahself

 

but im serious

go 2 the louis tomlinson forum and click the topic my obession 4 louis



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Posted 19 February 2013 - 03:06 AM

Chapter 2

Rylie's POV

 

 I waved to everyone as they got into their cars. Liam turned back, and shaped his hands into a heart. I did the same, then went to my room, and changed.

 

 I sat on my bed, txting Liam, when there was a knock at my bedroom door. I dropped my phone, then opened the door to Louis.

 

 "Listen, Ry, we need to talk." Louis said, sitting on my bed.

 

 I sat next to him. "What about?"

 

 He sighed. "Are you and Liam thinking about making things serious?"

 

 I stared at him. "What do you mean?"

 

 "I know you have a crush on him, but I don't want you two together."
 

 I stood up. "Why? I don't go tearing you and your girlfriends apart!"
 

 Louis stood up. "So, are you admitting you two are a thing?"

 

 "Fine, we're dating. Happy?"

 

 "No. I don't want you two together, and you won't be."

 

 "You're not dad! You can't say who I can, or can't be with!" I yelled. Our dad was a marine, and died at war.

 

"No, but I'm now responsible for taking care of you."

 

"You say that like it's a bad thing!" I yelled at him, crying. "You know what, get out of here!" I shoved him our of my room, and slammed the door in his face. I locked the door, and stared out the window, thinking.

 

I love Liam, and he loves me too. Louis can't keep us apart. We're just going to have to date secretly.



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Posted 19 February 2013 - 03:18 AM

oooooooooh



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Posted 19 February 2013 - 03:21 AM

Nice! ^ is that Caitlyn?

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Posted 19 February 2013 - 03:23 AM

ahhhh, the julianna monster has been realised!!!

XD



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Posted 19 February 2013 - 03:25 AM

Im lost

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Posted 19 February 2013 - 03:27 AM

LOL!

of course its me!

cheesenip=me

carrot=louis

translate--the caitlyn and louis

shave off the

caitlyn and louis



#13 Luvliampayne

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Posted 19 February 2013 - 03:30 AM

Oh so then him my and liam ummm

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Posted 19 February 2013 - 03:33 AM

hmmmmm.....wats the thing u love most(BESIDES liam)?

and wat does liam love most?



#15 Luvliampayne

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Posted 19 February 2013 - 03:37 AM

Hmmm i luv um im trying to think and liam hmmm he likes choclate i no that me though um…

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Posted 19 February 2013 - 03:38 AM

Hm i like pasta i luvv pasta that took me like 5min to think of lol

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Posted 19 February 2013 - 03:40 AM

lol

so...

if u had a username like mine, it'd be:the_pasta_and_chocolate



#18 Luvliampayne

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Posted 19 February 2013 - 03:41 AM

Thats not rite

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Posted 19 February 2013 - 03:41 AM

Lol

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Posted 19 February 2013 - 03:45 AM

totally!!!

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