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Posted 17 February 2013 - 08:12 PM

Chapter 5:

~Louis's POV in Moscow-

The plane just landed and I have to move fast and swiftly. I head out of the airport and wave to a taxi driver. He pulls over and I get in. I act out the location to him(Too bad Russians don't understand us) and he drives there.

 

I get out and walk up the the front desk. "Hello. Is there a girl here named Caitlyn _ _ _ _ _(not spelling out my last name)?", I ask. The man justs stares at me like "What the hell are you saying?". So, I act out what I just said. He shakes his head and babbles in Russian. I turn on my phone to translate that. "No sir, there's no girl here under that name.", the phone says. I thank the guy and get back into the taxi. There's one city off my list.

 

Next, I'm going to Sydney. I think Harry and Niall said they were heading there for vacation(and to get Niall away from Nandos). I call them just to make sure and take a flight to Sydney. This is gonna be at least 2 weeks before I get to Caitlyn, at the latest. But I will find her.

 

~My POV-

I hear feet shuffling down the hallway. I stuff my necklace in my sock(nobody will check there) and stand. The feet stop in front of my doorway and a guard opens the door. Adia. Lovely, just lovely. She says something to the guard in Italian and he nods and walks away. "Sorry about that. They place new girls there when they no have thier own stuff. Follow me.", she says. I walk out of the room and follow the crazy woman down the hallway.


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Posted 17 February 2013 - 08:27 PM

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Ongoing fanfics:

My Ex-Best Friend Harry - Ch. 4 posted 11/21/14

Hayley Willis was Harry Styles' best friend until six months ago, when they had a major fight.  Now, she has an abusive boyfriend named Preston, but she's afraid to report him for domestic violence, for fear that he'll just abuse her more.  When Hayley meets Harry for the first time in six months, Harry convinces her to face her fears and report the jerk.  Hayley and Harry rekindle their friendship, but will it turn into a romance?

 

Stockholm Syndrome - Ch. 7 posted 12/30/14

Skylar Harding is kidnapped by Niall Horan and the rest of One Direction to be Niall's pretend girlfriend, on the orders of Modest! Management.  Niall does everything to conceal Skylar's identity, including changing her name and hair color.  Skylar is resentful at first, but will she actually fall in love?

 

The One-Night Stand 2 - Ch. 1 posted 12/14/14

Broken Home - Ch. 5 posted 3/18/15

Rewrite of One Way or Another.  Kellie Hampton lives in a broken home where her dad constantly abuses her.  He'd even raped her on her thirteenth birthday.  Kellie's friend Brittany convinces her to vent to her cousin, Harry Styles, since Kellie is madly in love with him.  Harry completely understands her situation.

Just when she thinks things are finally looking up, Kellie is kidnapped and raped by her new history teacher, causing her dad to think she was out with a guy.  Kellie's dad subsequently kicks her out, prompting her to run away to Harry and the rest of One Direction.  Will life with One Direction be better than life at home?

 

It Started on Prom Night - Ch. 4 posted 4/1/15

Maya Butler is the girlfriend of Steven Bell. She wasn't planning on attending Senior Prom, but when Steven convinces her that One Direction is performing, she's all for it.

During One Direction's performance at prom, Louis sees Maya crying and quickly finds out why--Steven is dancing with another girl, namely his female friend Allison Brown. Having already met Maya just before the dance, he comforts her and talks her into dumping Steven. Will Louis mend Maya's broken heart?

 

Royal Romance - Ch. 1 posted 4/14/15

Princess Caryn Rifkin, the seventeen-year-old daughter of King Merton of London, is urged by her father to marry a handsome prince, but Caryn doesn't want anyone but Zayn Malik from One Direction.  Will King Merton approve of his daughter dating a commoner?

 

Completed fanfics:

The One-Night Stand

Meghan Teed has had a one-night stand habit since high school, bringing a different guy home every week.  She's set up on a date with Zayn Malik by her roommate Lauren, but that date, too, turns into a one-night stand.  After Meghan finds out she's pregnant, Lauren kicks her out of the house to teach her a lesson.  With nowhere to go, Meghan calls the baby's father, who turns out to be married to a woman who wants to kill her.  Then, Meghan calls Zayn, who at first refuses to let her stay with One Direction, but gives in when he hears of her situation.

At One Direction's mansion, Louis Tomlinson finds Meghan sleeping on the couch in the living room and accuses her of being a stalker.  When Meghan tells him otherwise, explaining the real reason she was there, Louis backs down.  Meghan and Louis eventually start dating, but will Louis be able to break Meghan of her habit?  Or will another guy come along and encourage it?

 

Summer Love (revised)

Jessalyn Martin wins a contest to tour with One Direction.  When she and her favorite, Liam Payne, meet at the airport in Stockholm, it's love at first sight.  But there's one thing standing between them--Jessalyn's abusive ex-boyfriend Aaron, who despises the fact that Jessalyn is dating another guy.  In his jealous rage, Aaron eventually kidnaps and rapes Jessalyn, and she become pregnant with triplets, but that doesn't stop Liam from being there for Jessalyn.  Will Jessalyn and Liam keep their love going, even when they're not together?


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Posted 17 February 2013 - 08:35 PM

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Posted 17 February 2013 - 08:51 PM

Chapter 6:

~Louis's POV-

I was sleeping on the plane when the speakers come on. "Welcome to Australila!!!", the captain booms. I shoot straight up in my seat and look out the window. Just across from the ariport, I saw Niall and Harry jumping up and down in the parking lot. I laugh and the flight lands.

 

I run out to the  parking lot and say "Hey lads!" "Hey. Where's your girlyfriend?", Harry teases. I get sad when he mentions that. "Oh, that's the surprize you wanted to tell us.", Niall says. I burst out crying. "She broke up with you, didn't she?", Harry says. "No!!! They took her away from me!!", I say while crying. "Huh? We need to get back to the hotel so you can tell us.", Niall says. We get in the car and I cry like crazy again.

 

**After we arrive to the hotel**

"They took her to a concentration camp?!", Harry exclaims. I nod while the tears dry on my face. "That's so stupid!", Niall says. "I know!!! And I'm trying to find her. But can I stay with you guys for a few days?", I ask. They nod and we go upstairs. Thier hotel room was clean. "Since when did you guys get clean?", I ask. They laugh and we start throwing pillows at each other, helping me forget about Caitlyn right now.

 

~My POV-

"This is your room!", Adia boasts as she opens the door. I walk inside and instantly love this room. It's got designing stuff everywhere. And the walls are bare. Ooooh.

 

"Hey, what is the stuff for?", I innocently ask. She tells me that I'm allowed to paint the walls any way I want to. "Of course, you can't do this all time. They have things for all girls to do down in main hall.", she says. I nod and play with the paints. She closes the door softly and I pull out the necklace again.

 

I hug the necklace and open it back up. Louis's in Australia. I miss him. And I'm not sure how long I'm gonna go without him. But he's with me, even though he's gone. Thanks to this necklace. I lay on the bed and stare at the celing, thinking about Louis.


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Posted 17 February 2013 - 08:54 PM

Post more soon!


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Ongoing fanfics:

My Ex-Best Friend Harry - Ch. 4 posted 11/21/14

Hayley Willis was Harry Styles' best friend until six months ago, when they had a major fight.  Now, she has an abusive boyfriend named Preston, but she's afraid to report him for domestic violence, for fear that he'll just abuse her more.  When Hayley meets Harry for the first time in six months, Harry convinces her to face her fears and report the jerk.  Hayley and Harry rekindle their friendship, but will it turn into a romance?

 

Stockholm Syndrome - Ch. 7 posted 12/30/14

Skylar Harding is kidnapped by Niall Horan and the rest of One Direction to be Niall's pretend girlfriend, on the orders of Modest! Management.  Niall does everything to conceal Skylar's identity, including changing her name and hair color.  Skylar is resentful at first, but will she actually fall in love?

 

The One-Night Stand 2 - Ch. 1 posted 12/14/14

Broken Home - Ch. 5 posted 3/18/15

Rewrite of One Way or Another.  Kellie Hampton lives in a broken home where her dad constantly abuses her.  He'd even raped her on her thirteenth birthday.  Kellie's friend Brittany convinces her to vent to her cousin, Harry Styles, since Kellie is madly in love with him.  Harry completely understands her situation.

Just when she thinks things are finally looking up, Kellie is kidnapped and raped by her new history teacher, causing her dad to think she was out with a guy.  Kellie's dad subsequently kicks her out, prompting her to run away to Harry and the rest of One Direction.  Will life with One Direction be better than life at home?

 

It Started on Prom Night - Ch. 4 posted 4/1/15

Maya Butler is the girlfriend of Steven Bell. She wasn't planning on attending Senior Prom, but when Steven convinces her that One Direction is performing, she's all for it.

During One Direction's performance at prom, Louis sees Maya crying and quickly finds out why--Steven is dancing with another girl, namely his female friend Allison Brown. Having already met Maya just before the dance, he comforts her and talks her into dumping Steven. Will Louis mend Maya's broken heart?

 

Royal Romance - Ch. 1 posted 4/14/15

Princess Caryn Rifkin, the seventeen-year-old daughter of King Merton of London, is urged by her father to marry a handsome prince, but Caryn doesn't want anyone but Zayn Malik from One Direction.  Will King Merton approve of his daughter dating a commoner?

 

Completed fanfics:

The One-Night Stand

Meghan Teed has had a one-night stand habit since high school, bringing a different guy home every week.  She's set up on a date with Zayn Malik by her roommate Lauren, but that date, too, turns into a one-night stand.  After Meghan finds out she's pregnant, Lauren kicks her out of the house to teach her a lesson.  With nowhere to go, Meghan calls the baby's father, who turns out to be married to a woman who wants to kill her.  Then, Meghan calls Zayn, who at first refuses to let her stay with One Direction, but gives in when he hears of her situation.

At One Direction's mansion, Louis Tomlinson finds Meghan sleeping on the couch in the living room and accuses her of being a stalker.  When Meghan tells him otherwise, explaining the real reason she was there, Louis backs down.  Meghan and Louis eventually start dating, but will Louis be able to break Meghan of her habit?  Or will another guy come along and encourage it?

 

Summer Love (revised)

Jessalyn Martin wins a contest to tour with One Direction.  When she and her favorite, Liam Payne, meet at the airport in Stockholm, it's love at first sight.  But there's one thing standing between them--Jessalyn's abusive ex-boyfriend Aaron, who despises the fact that Jessalyn is dating another guy.  In his jealous rage, Aaron eventually kidnaps and rapes Jessalyn, and she become pregnant with triplets, but that doesn't stop Liam from being there for Jessalyn.  Will Jessalyn and Liam keep their love going, even when they're not together?


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Posted 17 February 2013 - 08:54 PM

I love it. Plz post more soon

I LOVE CARROTS.

I HAVE A FEAR OF SPOONS.

I LOVE THE COLOR PURPLE.


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Posted 17 February 2013 - 08:56 PM

This is really good.
I can't help but try to find my future wife in the crowd.- Niall

I like girls who eat carrots!- Louis

Vas happinin?- Zayn

I've always had a strange fear of spoons.- Liam

Until I have the perfect girl, I have Louis.- Harry

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Posted 17 February 2013 - 08:57 PM

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Posted 17 February 2013 - 09:11 PM

It's good Caitlyn! I just got home!

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Posted 17 February 2013 - 09:23 PM

thnx and YAY! I HAD CHOCOLATE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

 

and get this: juliet was between 13 or 14 when she married Romeo!

and....er, well, i'll give you guys the links

 

http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Juliet

http://en.wikipedia....and_Juliet#Love

http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Romeo


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Posted 17 February 2013 - 10:18 PM

i'm bored. has anyone else read this??????


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Posted 17 February 2013 - 11:28 PM

I'm making chicken for dinner!  Chicken with orange-rosemary glaze, to be exact.  Yummmm!


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Ongoing fanfics:

My Ex-Best Friend Harry - Ch. 4 posted 11/21/14

Hayley Willis was Harry Styles' best friend until six months ago, when they had a major fight.  Now, she has an abusive boyfriend named Preston, but she's afraid to report him for domestic violence, for fear that he'll just abuse her more.  When Hayley meets Harry for the first time in six months, Harry convinces her to face her fears and report the jerk.  Hayley and Harry rekindle their friendship, but will it turn into a romance?

 

Stockholm Syndrome - Ch. 7 posted 12/30/14

Skylar Harding is kidnapped by Niall Horan and the rest of One Direction to be Niall's pretend girlfriend, on the orders of Modest! Management.  Niall does everything to conceal Skylar's identity, including changing her name and hair color.  Skylar is resentful at first, but will she actually fall in love?

 

The One-Night Stand 2 - Ch. 1 posted 12/14/14

Broken Home - Ch. 5 posted 3/18/15

Rewrite of One Way or Another.  Kellie Hampton lives in a broken home where her dad constantly abuses her.  He'd even raped her on her thirteenth birthday.  Kellie's friend Brittany convinces her to vent to her cousin, Harry Styles, since Kellie is madly in love with him.  Harry completely understands her situation.

Just when she thinks things are finally looking up, Kellie is kidnapped and raped by her new history teacher, causing her dad to think she was out with a guy.  Kellie's dad subsequently kicks her out, prompting her to run away to Harry and the rest of One Direction.  Will life with One Direction be better than life at home?

 

It Started on Prom Night - Ch. 4 posted 4/1/15

Maya Butler is the girlfriend of Steven Bell. She wasn't planning on attending Senior Prom, but when Steven convinces her that One Direction is performing, she's all for it.

During One Direction's performance at prom, Louis sees Maya crying and quickly finds out why--Steven is dancing with another girl, namely his female friend Allison Brown. Having already met Maya just before the dance, he comforts her and talks her into dumping Steven. Will Louis mend Maya's broken heart?

 

Royal Romance - Ch. 1 posted 4/14/15

Princess Caryn Rifkin, the seventeen-year-old daughter of King Merton of London, is urged by her father to marry a handsome prince, but Caryn doesn't want anyone but Zayn Malik from One Direction.  Will King Merton approve of his daughter dating a commoner?

 

Completed fanfics:

The One-Night Stand

Meghan Teed has had a one-night stand habit since high school, bringing a different guy home every week.  She's set up on a date with Zayn Malik by her roommate Lauren, but that date, too, turns into a one-night stand.  After Meghan finds out she's pregnant, Lauren kicks her out of the house to teach her a lesson.  With nowhere to go, Meghan calls the baby's father, who turns out to be married to a woman who wants to kill her.  Then, Meghan calls Zayn, who at first refuses to let her stay with One Direction, but gives in when he hears of her situation.

At One Direction's mansion, Louis Tomlinson finds Meghan sleeping on the couch in the living room and accuses her of being a stalker.  When Meghan tells him otherwise, explaining the real reason she was there, Louis backs down.  Meghan and Louis eventually start dating, but will Louis be able to break Meghan of her habit?  Or will another guy come along and encourage it?

 

Summer Love (revised)

Jessalyn Martin wins a contest to tour with One Direction.  When she and her favorite, Liam Payne, meet at the airport in Stockholm, it's love at first sight.  But there's one thing standing between them--Jessalyn's abusive ex-boyfriend Aaron, who despises the fact that Jessalyn is dating another guy.  In his jealous rage, Aaron eventually kidnaps and rapes Jessalyn, and she become pregnant with triplets, but that doesn't stop Liam from being there for Jessalyn.  Will Jessalyn and Liam keep their love going, even when they're not together?


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Posted 17 February 2013 - 11:42 PM

lol

i had fish


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Posted 17 February 2013 - 11:43 PM

I haven't had dinner

I LOVE CARROTS.

I HAVE A FEAR OF SPOONS.

I LOVE THE COLOR PURPLE.


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Posted 17 February 2013 - 11:44 PM

This is briliant so far

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Posted 17 February 2013 - 11:44 PM

thinking about reading more of romeo and juliet

i found a script online

right now, im on act 1, scene 5


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Posted 17 February 2013 - 11:45 PM

CAITLYN PLZ POST MORE BEFORE I START SPAZZING OUT

I LOVE CARROTS.

I HAVE A FEAR OF SPOONS.

I LOVE THE COLOR PURPLE.


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Posted 17 February 2013 - 11:48 PM

spazz out all u want 2.

give me until 7 pm and then i'll upload


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Posted 17 February 2013 - 11:49 PM

Umm we have different time zones so I don't know what time it is where you live

I LOVE CARROTS.

I HAVE A FEAR OF SPOONS.

I LOVE THE COLOR PURPLE.




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