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Posted 23 February 2013 - 02:28 AM

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Posted 23 February 2013 - 02:29 AM

hmm...try Elliott's link.  It's in the Help thread


Fave quotes from my concert in Louisville:

It feels great to have me own 'Ville! ~Louis on having a city "named after him" (I'm pretty sure Louisville was named after a different Louis lln)

The three things I love most about Kentucky are: (1) the chicken, (2) the chicken, and (3)...*long pause* ALL OF YOU GUYS! ~Zayn

 

Fave quotes from my concert in Chicago:

Harry *to Caroline, the girl with the broken arm*: How did you fall?

Caroline: I fell funny.

*the crowd laughs*

 

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My Ex-Best Friend Harry - Ch. 4 posted 11/21/14

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Posted 23 February 2013 - 02:36 AM

Chapter 15 Stephanie's pov
St- bye dad see you later. I said then left the house. I was headed to uncle Zayns house to see if Sam was there. I was about half way there when I rage was pulled over my mouth and a sack over my head. I tried to fight my way out but it was no use. Every thing just went black.

Kelli's pov
I was walking back home to tell dad about Jordan and Sam when something was pulled over my mouth. My hands were being tied together and a black bag over my head. CRASH all went black.

SAMs pov
I had finally gotten Jordan awake and the two other people where thrown into the room. The the two men stepped in the room.
(M1- man 1 m2- man two)
M1- which one do you want?
M2- ill take the brown, you?
M1- ill take the blond. The first man walked towards me and I kept scotting backwards. I was finally up agents the wall scared to death. The mantra bed my arm and dragged me towards the door.
S- Jordan help me! I screamed but it was to late she was being dragged out onther door. I started fighting back at the man but he was stronger then I was, so he just kept yanking me away.

Jordan's pov
J- SAM SAM HELP ME! I screamed as I was yanked in to a room. The man grow me by me arm and I hit the wall and fell to the floor.

What will happen ask Jordan lol

im hurting. but no one knows. im drowning but no one can save me. im dying and no one cares.


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Posted 23 February 2013 - 02:39 AM

ooooooooh post soon, Jordan!


Fave quotes from my concert in Louisville:

It feels great to have me own 'Ville! ~Louis on having a city "named after him" (I'm pretty sure Louisville was named after a different Louis lln)

The three things I love most about Kentucky are: (1) the chicken, (2) the chicken, and (3)...*long pause* ALL OF YOU GUYS! ~Zayn

 

Fave quotes from my concert in Chicago:

Harry *to Caroline, the girl with the broken arm*: How did you fall?

Caroline: I fell funny.

*the crowd laughs*

 

Twitter: @holynandos86

Wattpad: HolyNandosItsSteph

Kik: StiallWoran86

Movellas: StephanieHoran86

 

Check out my 5SOS forums!

Also, please visit my backup 1D forums!

 

Ongoing fanfics:

My Ex-Best Friend Harry - Ch. 4 posted 11/21/14

A London Christmas (sequel to An Irish Christmas) - Ch. 2 posted 12/7/14

Stockholm Syndrome - Ch. 3 posted 12/8/14

The One-Night Stand 2 - Ch. 1 posted 12/14/14

 

Completed fanfics:

The One-Night Stand


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Posted 23 February 2013 - 02:40 AM

Kk in a few.
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Posted 23 February 2013 - 02:47 AM

Chapter 16

Sams pov

S JORDAN JORDAN HELP!
M1 it's no use she can't hear you
S screw you. For that I got a slap across my check.

Stephanie's pov

I woke up and pulled the sack off my head. I looked and saw another body. Kelli. I crawled over to her and untied her hands and took the sack off her head and she woke up and hugged me.
St where are we?
K I don't know. Just then Sam and jordan got thrown back in here and the men walked out
J my back and stomach hurt he threw me against a wall and punched me in the stomach.
S I said screw you cause you couldnt here me and he just slapped me.
K and st are you ok.
S and j now we know you're with us yeah I guess.
J owww. My stomach. We all cuddled around Jordan and fell into a restless sleep
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Posted 23 February 2013 - 03:05 AM

Ooh my turn

im hurting. but no one knows. im drowning but no one can save me. im dying and no one cares.


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Posted 23 February 2013 - 03:26 AM

Yup
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Posted 23 February 2013 - 03:31 AM

Chapter 17 SAMs pov
We where all crowed around Jordan and most of us where asleep but not me and Jordan.
J- Sam I'm scared. Jordan said with tears rolling down her checks
S- I know I am too. Just then the door was opened and the men came back in and grabbed my arms
M1- leave that one just help me with this one.
M2- will be back missy. He said to Jordan. Then I was dragged away.
S- what do you want with me?
M1- shut your mouth!
S- no I demand what you want with me.
M2- we said shirt up shit hole!
S- no!
M1- that's it! The man kicked me across the room, the second man came up and kept hitting me in my face. I could feel the warm blood run down my face but her kept beating me. Just before they dragged me back something very hard hit my stomach. I gasped for breath and I hear the men laugh before I blacked out.

Jordan's pov
It had been at least two hours since sam was taken away from the rest of us. I could hear her faint screams, they had to be attached to our parents cause if not why would they take us. Just then the door opened and the two men grow Sam in the room, she crashed to the floor right around me. She was out cold and bleeding.

Zayns pov
Where could my baby girl be!?!?!? Perrie is falling apart and so is Taylor and so was Elanore (I think that is how you spell it). Every one was at our house cause we were afraid that the rest of the girls would be taken.
T- Taylor h- Harry e- Elanore p- Perrie l- Louis z- Zayn
P- what do you think might be happening to them?
L- it's hard to say Perrie but I'm sure they are doing fine. I could tell Louis was living but still.
H- Taylor we will find them I promise
Z- if only we had a clue as to where the went.
E- what's that over there Louis? She pointed to a note on SAMs backpack. I picked it up and read it out loud.
Z- if you can find us you'll know who we are, your girls are at the farthest point in the map. Good luck. Picked up a map and located all the farthest point I the map and showed the others.

Kelli's pov
K- nooooooo! I shouted as the men brought it down on me. After getting beaten a little bit more I was dragged back to the room where the others where, Sam was still out cold and Jordan was sitting next to her.

What will happen next ask the second wrighter Jordan

im hurting. but no one knows. im drowning but no one can save me. im dying and no one cares.


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Posted 23 February 2013 - 03:34 AM

Lol. I'll post. In a few
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Posted 23 February 2013 - 03:37 AM

Ok

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Posted 23 February 2013 - 03:41 AM

Chapter 18

Jordan's pov

I got dragged away and Jordan did too.
J KELLI LOOK AFTER HER!
M2 shut it
J make me. I got a slap and a punch in the stomach.
M2 will you shut it now. I shook my head. He punched me in the stomach again and this time I coughed up blood.
M2 how about now. I nodded. And hit thrown back to Sam and kelli. Kelli was sobbing and Sam was sill out cold.

Stephanie's pov

I got hit in the stomach. Just then a young boy about my age came in and started flirting with me.mb myster boy
S go away
Mb make me do I punched him where no boy wants to be punched. And ran to Jordan kelli and Sam.

Sams pov

I woke up. Jordan was sitting in a corner tying not to cry. She was homesick and it looked like she had coughed up blood. Not good.

Jordan's pov

I kept coughing up blood I tried not to. I crawled to a corner and tried not to cry. I wanna go home.

Perrie pov.

We set out for the furthest place on the map in hopes we would find Jordan Sam kelli and Stephanie. 4 16 year old girls. Why do these people want them?

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Posted 23 February 2013 - 03:44 AM

Hehe my turn

im hurting. but no one knows. im drowning but no one can save me. im dying and no one cares.


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Posted 23 February 2013 - 03:52 AM

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Posted 23 February 2013 - 03:53 AM

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Posted 23 February 2013 - 03:54 AM

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Posted 23 February 2013 - 03:58 AM

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Posted 23 February 2013 - 04:00 AM

Chapter 19
SAMs pov
We were all beaten up pretty bad but know one was as bad as me and Jordan. I pulled my self to Jordan and hugged her. A few minutes later a boy about our age came in
J- that is the master boy
S- well he don't scare me! I said firmly
Mb- of really? I looked up and was but back wards I but my head a blacked out again.

Jordan's pov
The master boy dragged Sam out of the room and then the same happens to me.

Louis's pov
L- we are almost there just another hour
E- I think I'm gonna faint. Jus then Elanore fell over and Harry and Zayn picked her up and leaned her against the door.
L- that road right Harry?
H- no the next one
P- what would they want with four 16 year old girls Zayn?
Z- I have an idea but other then that I dig know hunny, we will find them and the people who did this to them. Perrie leaned against Zayn chest and cried. I couldn't blame her I wanted to cry too.
T- is that the road?
H- yes Louis turn there.
L- ok. I turned Down a road and stopped.
Z- what so it Louis.
L- an ascendent up a head can't go fast traffic.
P- huh. Perrie also fainted now who is next let me truss Taylor.

SAMs pov
I woke up a few hours later in a warm bed. I looked around and saw the master boy sitting up playing with my hair and he was....was necked. I slapped him and he came back and kicked me in the stomach.
S- you used me you shut head!
Mb- you shouldn't have said that. Cause the next thing I knew I was getting beaten so hard I throw up blood.

Your turn Jordan

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Posted 23 February 2013 - 04:10 AM

Chapter 20

Stephanie's pov

Jordan finally came back but Sam has been gone for ages. I'm worried now.

Sams pov

I lay on the bed and te boy dragged me to the basement.
J what happened?
S he …
J ok.
K Sam have you coughed up blood
S shoot howdya know.
K your top
S oh. The boy he kicked my stomach
St owch. I looked around and I was starving I think we all were. Stephanie and kelli had galled into a restless sleep. Jordan looked like she could pass out from no food or water. I don't care if all I get is a round of bread. I need something.

Jordan's pov

Need ........ Food......... Hold........on...........Jordan. After that I passed out from hunger.

Kellis pov

I woke up Sam and staph anime were up and Jordan had passed out from no food.

Louis pov

We haven't got far to go I thought. I hope they're ok.
Li they'll be fine.
L HOW DO YOU KNOW YOUR DAUGHTERS SAFE MINE ISN'T I DON'T KNOW WAHTS HAPPENING TO HER. I sobbed.
E it's ok boo bear
T we know how you feel we all do.
H is this it here?

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Posted 23 February 2013 - 04:52 AM

Chapter 21
Z- yes it is lets go!!!!!

SAMs pov
Jordan passed out from hunger I kept coughing up blood and my shirt was covered init now. I think I'm gonna die. Just then I heard something from upstairs then the door flung open and the men hid in corners. A few minutes later our parents nitrated throw the door.
Z-p- SAM!!! They started towards me but soon stopped when the master boy picked me up. I screamed I'm pain, I think my leg and arm are broken. I felt something sharp against my skin.
Mb- don't come any closer or the girl dies! My mom was sobbing and my dad was growing madder. I just got an idea
S- get him dad! I yelled the I put my hand on the master boys hand and pushed the knife into my side causing the man to look down long enough for my dad to grab him and Louis to grab the other men. During that time I fell to the floor bleeding out my side. My mom ran to my side.
P- Sam hunny your going to be ok I promise.
S- I'm sorry mom.
P- it's not your fault Sam I love you.
S- I love you to. I manage to say, I started hyper ventilating. My mom called my dad to my side. My dad put my head on his lap and I coughed up more blood.
Z- Sam listen to me, I love you and I'm not mad this was not your fault.
S- I love you dad. I said my voice was almost gone. I watched at the others where helped out by people every one of then crying at the site of me. I looked at my dad and then passed out.

Will I die ask Jordan

im hurting. but no one knows. im drowning but no one can save me. im dying and no one cares.



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