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Posted 06 February 2013 - 03:11 AM

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Hi my name is Mystery, I'm 18 years old and I have never meet my breath parents. I have been in and out of orphanages my hole life. I was just adopted in to a new home, there is another girl in the house her name is Ruth and if you told me she would hate me I would have told you your fully of it but she does, but what I didn't know what that my life was about to change forever!
Chapter 1 at the orphanage Mystery's pov
Today was the day I was heading to my new home and tomorrow I would starts school.
"Hello you must be mystery." A nice hound lady said.
"Yes I am." I followed her out to the car. We drove for what seemed like hours, tell we came to the small town of Bradford. The lady pulled in to this beautiful house and I got out of the car.
"Welcome to your new home mystery." I opens the door to the house and my mouth dropped it was so pretty and clean.
"Come with me ill show your your bed room." I followed miss Ross said. She pushed open a door and I walked in. The room was painted light green and the currents over the window where light blue the bed had was blue with green stripes. I opens the closet and found tons on nice button up shirts and halter tops. There wear also tons of high tops and skater shoes. The dresser had a bunch a very fashionable shirts and pants. The desk had ha lamp and some books, there was also a Box on the desk and an iHome.
"Open the box!" I opens it and pulled out a brand new iPod and it was the 5th gen.
"There is also a new computer in the bag in the bed, ill leave you to do what ever and to transfer the stuff from your old I pod to your new one ok." Miss Ross walked out of the room and I put m bag down and sat down on the bed. I looked over everything and took out the only thing that meant something to me: it is a necklace that my berth mom gave me before she left me. The necklace was the most beautiful thing I owned. Just then there was a knock in the door
"Come in." Miss Ross and this other girl came in my room.
"Mystery thus is Ruth your new sister, Ruth this is mystery."
"Hello there." Ruth said kinda rude
"Hi." They both left and I sat there alone in my room.

Tell me what you think

im hurting. but no one knows. im drowning but no one can save me. im dying and no one cares.


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Posted 06 February 2013 - 03:13 AM

great!


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Posted 06 February 2013 - 03:14 AM

Thx

im hurting. but no one knows. im drowning but no one can save me. im dying and no one cares.


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Posted 06 February 2013 - 03:18 AM

welcome

4 some odd reason dat de universe doesnt even kno, im chewing on my finger..... very weird.............


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Posted 06 February 2013 - 05:21 AM

I'm watching eclipse right now

im hurting. but no one knows. im drowning but no one can save me. im dying and no one cares.


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Posted 06 February 2013 - 06:56 AM

More
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Posted 06 February 2013 - 12:06 PM

ew, Sam.  Ew.  I hate Twilight. lol post more soon!


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Posted 06 February 2013 - 03:33 PM

It's was better the the walking dead I had nightmares about that

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Posted 06 February 2013 - 07:36 PM

srry, but i agree w/ stephanie.

hate twlight.

but my friends love twlight

but they hate 1D

i luv 1D

 

weird....... :D


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Posted 06 February 2013 - 07:38 PM

yeah that is weird lol


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Posted 06 February 2013 - 07:38 PM

:lol:!!!


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Posted 06 February 2013 - 07:40 PM

Same.
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Posted 06 February 2013 - 07:46 PM

Ok

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Posted 06 February 2013 - 10:02 PM

EPIC

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Posted 06 February 2013 - 11:14 PM

Luvvv its does this countinue from ur one other story…

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Posted 06 February 2013 - 11:58 PM

Chapter 2 Mystery's pov
"Mystery hunny wake up time for school." Miss Ross oh I mean my mom said sweetly
"I'm up."'I said the stumbled out I'd bed. I picked out a nice pair of baby blue skinny jeans and a pink tank top with a green halter top over it. I pulled out the red pair of high tops and put those on as well.
"Mom where is the cereal?" I asked as I stood I the middle of the kitchen/
"On the table." I looked to my right and saw the table and a freshly poured bowl. I sat down and ate.
"Good morning Ruth." I said once she came into the kitchen
"Morning mystery." She said the. Sat down next to me.
"Girls time to go." I grabbed my backpack and followed Ruth to her car and we both drove off to school.
~~~~ten minutes later~~~~
Ruth pulled into the school parking lot and I jumped out.
"Lets go and get you your schedule." Ruth said pulling me along with her. After we got my stuff I followed Ruth to the first class ( we have that one together) Ruth went ahead and sat down and I waited in the door way.
"Class we have a new student." The teacher said inviting me in.
"Please tell us your name sweetie."
"My name is Mystery Ross." I said
"Well Mystery you can sit next to that boy over there, and Zayn keep your hands to your self please." I took the open seat next to this really cute boy.
"Ok so before you go you have a project due next week and it is a partner project so please chose your partners wisely." The teacher said
"Now get out of here." People started running out of the room and I was gathering my stuff when Ruth and the boy I sat next to came up to me.
"Hey Zayn wanna be my partner?" She asked in a charming voice
"No I have some one else I wanna ask sorry Ruth." She walked away sadly and Zayn turned to me
"Your name is Mystery right?"
"Ya and your Zayn?"
"Yup, so do you want to be my partner?"
"But what about my sister?"
"I don't like her, she just wants to date me that's all."
"Ok ya I would love to be your partner." I walked out of the room and to my locker.

im hurting. but no one knows. im drowning but no one can save me. im dying and no one cares.


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Posted 07 February 2013 - 12:00 AM

oooooh, nice chapter!  Post more soon!


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Posted 07 February 2013 - 12:01 AM

Ohhh so it doesnt connect oblia lol i just atempted to spell forget in french not spelt rite though lol plz post more

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Posted 07 February 2013 - 12:02 AM

AWESOME

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Posted 07 February 2013 - 12:03 AM

Ikr


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