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#161 Luvliampayne

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Posted 22 February 2013 - 12:20 AM

Yay!!!!! I got my iPod, laptop and tv tooken away so i i couldnt get on any way at all

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Posted 22 February 2013 - 12:22 AM

mannnnnn dats gotta suck


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Posted 22 February 2013 - 12:23 AM

No kidding

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Posted 22 February 2013 - 12:29 AM

my chin hurts


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#165 Penguins + 1D=me :D

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Posted 22 February 2013 - 12:31 AM

Then how r u on?
I <3 all my 1D lovin' BFF's

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Posted 22 February 2013 - 12:35 AM

iPod my dad gave it back like 35min aho he didnt give me my laptop yet though

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Posted 22 February 2013 - 12:35 AM

:(


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Posted 22 February 2013 - 12:40 AM

Yah

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Posted 22 February 2013 - 09:17 PM

Chapter 18

 

Sam and I arrived in Trenton to pick up my car that evening.  We had a long drive ahead of us, so we checked into a hotel in a small town south of Trenton for the night.

 

“Hi,” I said to the receptionist.  “Do you have any rooms with cribs available?”

 

“We sure do,” the receptionist said.  “But aren’t you girls a little young to be mothers?”

 

“We’re not as young as we look,” Sam lied.

 

“Yeah!” I agreed.  “We’re, umm…twenty!”

 

“Yeah, twenty!”

 

The receptionist laughed.  “Okay.  I’ll put you girls in room 245.  Here are you keys.”  She pulled out two room keys and gave them to us.

 

We put our bags on a luggage cart and took the elevator to our room.  Another employee followed us with a crib.  He put it against the wall between the TV and the luggage rack.  I thanked him, and he left us alone.

 

~~~~~

 

Sam and I spent most of the night nursing Christabelle, as she kept waking up every two hours.  I also had to calm London down, as she woke up whenever Christabelle did.  I don’t know how we managed to get any sleep, but we did.

 

The next morning, we set out for Bradenton.  My GPS told is we’d be there in 15 hours, so we decided to stop at a hotel halfway there.

 

“Halfway there” turned out to be a small town in South Carolina called Orangeburg.  It took us way more than seven and a half hours, because the girls kept crying for a diaper change or to be nursed.

 

Once again, the receptionist at the hotel asked if we were underage, and of course we lied and said no.  We got away with it again!

 

The next morning, we left on the final leg of our trip to Bradenton, Florida.  This trip went a lot smoother, probably because the girls were getting used to being on the road.

 

We reached 360 Cape Harbour Loop, Bradenton, Florida, at four in the afternoon.  There were two short white buildings in front of a small parking lot.

 

“Okay, this Carissa Cobb lives in Unit 106,” I said as Sam and I got out and picked up the girls.

 

“Okay,” Sam said.

 

Sam followed me into the building on the left, hoping it contained Unit 106.  Sure enough, we found it.  I knocked on the door.

 

An old lady answered the door.  “May I help you girls?” she asked.

 

“Um, hi.  Is Carissa Cobb home?” I asked.

 

“No, she doesn’t live here anymore.  She and her husband moved to Arizona.”

 

“Oh, okay.  Thanks.”

 

Sam and I left for Payson.  We were halfway to our next stop, Augusta, Georgia, when my cell phone rang.  Liam.

 

CLIFFHANGER!!! lln


Fave quotes from my concert in Louisville:

It feels great to have me own 'Ville! ~Louis on having a city "named after him" (I'm pretty sure Louisville was named after a different Louis lln)

The three things I love most about Kentucky are: (1) the chicken, (2) the chicken, and (3)...*long pause* ALL OF YOU GUYS! ~Zayn

 

Fave quotes from my concert in Chicago:

Harry *to Caroline, the girl with the broken arm*: How did you fall?

Caroline: I fell funny.

*the crowd laughs*

 

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Ongoing fanfics:

The One-Night Stand - Ch. 17 posted 11/22/14

My Ex-Best Friend Harry - Ch. 4 posted 11/21/14


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Posted 22 February 2013 - 09:31 PM

This is great!!!! Post more!!!!!!!!!


       Louis Tomlinson

    Niall Horan

   Harry Styles

    Liam Payne

           Zayn Malik

    One Direction

 


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Posted 22 February 2013 - 09:46 PM

Holy fart I love it!!

Elliott xx


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Posted 22 February 2013 - 10:53 PM

Yes post nore plzzzzz

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Posted 23 February 2013 - 01:38 PM

Post more sooooon
I can't help but try to find my future wife in the crowd.- Niall

I like girls who eat carrots!- Louis

Vas happinin?- Zayn

I've always had a strange fear of spoons.- Liam

Until I have the perfect girl, I have Louis.- Harry

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Posted 23 February 2013 - 11:51 PM

Chapter 19

 

“Hello?” I said when I answered.

 

“Hey, love.  I just wanted to make sure you were alright,” Liam said.

 

“Yeah, we’re just fine.”

 

“You sound like you’re in a car.  Where are you going?”

 

“Um, uh…Nando’s!  We’re going to Nando’s!”

 

“Oh, okay then.  Well, we’re on our way to Berlin for our show there.  We’ll see you in a few days!”

 

“Okay, bye.”

 

I heaved a sigh of relief as I hung up.

 

“Was that Liam?” Sam asked.

 

“Yeah, he was just checking on us,” I replied.

 

“Good.  We still have a few days, right?”

 

“Right.”

 

~~~~~

 

Three days and hotel stays in Augusta and Plano later, we finally arrived at the house in Payson, Arizona.  It was a small house in the middle of nowhere.  Sam and I got out with the girls into the Arizona heat and headed for the front door.  I knocked, and a man in his thirties answered it.  As soon as he saw me, he grew bug-eyed.

 

“HOLY SHIT, YOU’RE CARISSA!” he said.

 

“I’m not Carissa, I’m her daughter,” I said.

 

“You look JUST LIKE my Carissa!  What’s your name?  I’m Mark.”

 

“I’m Charity.”

 

“You look like mincemeat to me.”

 

“EXCUSE ME?!” we both said.

 

“Um…Sam?” I said nervously.

 

“Yeah, Charity?” she said.

 

“RUN!”

 

We started to run, but Mark grabbed us both by the backs of our shirts, causing us to drop our baby carriers.  I could hear both babies crying as Mark dragged us inside.  He started his torture with me, using me like a punching bag until I was black and blue all over.  He then knocked my head against the coffee table, and everything went black.

 

~~~~~

 

Liam’s POV

 

“Babe, we’re home!” I shouted as the lads and I walked through the door.

 

No answer.  Charity usually runs to the door whenever I get home.

 

“Hello!” Zayn called.

 

“Hey, I found something by the computer,” Harry said.  We all joined him to take a look.  It was a sheet of paper with two addresses on it—one in Bradenton, Florida, and the other in Payson, Arizona.

 

I was furious now.  I knew what those addresses had to be.  “I TOLD HER TO WAIT UNTIL WE GOT HOME SO I COULD GO WITH HER!” I yelled.  “That’s it!  I’m calling Charity!”

 

I pulled out my cell and called Charity.  A man answered.  “Hello?”

 

“Hey, bloke.  I believe you have my girlfriend’s cell phone.  Where is she?”

 

“I ain’t tellin’ you!” the man said.

 

“Where are you, mate?”

 

“Phoenix, but what’s it to you?”

 

I put it on speaker.  “Lads, ‘One Way or Another’.  Hit it!”

 

One way or another

I’m gonna find ya

I’m gonna getcha getcha getcha getcha

One way or another

I’m gonna see ya

I’m gonna meetcha meetcha meetcha meetcha

 

The man cut us off with laughter.  “You guys are HORRIBLE singers!”

 

“We’re gonna find you and beat you up!” I shouted.

 

The man laughed again.  “I’d like to see you try.”

 

“Seriously, bloke!  I know where you live!”  I hung up on him, and we headed to the airport to fly to Phoenix.


Fave quotes from my concert in Louisville:

It feels great to have me own 'Ville! ~Louis on having a city "named after him" (I'm pretty sure Louisville was named after a different Louis lln)

The three things I love most about Kentucky are: (1) the chicken, (2) the chicken, and (3)...*long pause* ALL OF YOU GUYS! ~Zayn

 

Fave quotes from my concert in Chicago:

Harry *to Caroline, the girl with the broken arm*: How did you fall?

Caroline: I fell funny.

*the crowd laughs*

 

Twitter: @holynandos86

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Check out my 5SOS forums!

Also, please visit my backup 1D forums!

 

Ongoing fanfics:

The One-Night Stand - Ch. 17 posted 11/22/14

My Ex-Best Friend Harry - Ch. 4 posted 11/21/14


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Posted 23 February 2013 - 11:53 PM

Holy poop!
WHAT HAPPENED TO THE BABIES?!?!?!?!?!

Elliott xx


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Posted 23 February 2013 - 11:54 PM

you'll see...lln


Fave quotes from my concert in Louisville:

It feels great to have me own 'Ville! ~Louis on having a city "named after him" (I'm pretty sure Louisville was named after a different Louis lln)

The three things I love most about Kentucky are: (1) the chicken, (2) the chicken, and (3)...*long pause* ALL OF YOU GUYS! ~Zayn

 

Fave quotes from my concert in Chicago:

Harry *to Caroline, the girl with the broken arm*: How did you fall?

Caroline: I fell funny.

*the crowd laughs*

 

Twitter: @holynandos86

Wattpad: HolyNandosItsSteph

Kik: StiallWoran86

Movellas: StephanieHoran86

 

Check out my 5SOS forums!

Also, please visit my backup 1D forums!

 

Ongoing fanfics:

The One-Night Stand - Ch. 17 posted 11/22/14

My Ex-Best Friend Harry - Ch. 4 posted 11/21/14


#177 Pinky101

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Posted 23 February 2013 - 11:55 PM

O............K............A..........Y?!?!?

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Posted 24 February 2013 - 02:13 AM

lol elliot

 

more stephanie


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Posted 24 February 2013 - 02:15 AM

Ikr!

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Posted 24 February 2013 - 03:06 AM

Luvvvvv it


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