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#1 StephanieHoran86

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Posted 22 January 2013 - 01:30 AM

This is a Liam fanfic!  I put some of you guys in it, too.

 

Leila - Niall's gf

Jordan - Louis' gf

Sam - Zayn's gf

Rachael - Harry's gf

 

Chapter 1

 

I was lazing around on a sunny Saturday when my cell phone rang.  It was my friend Leila Carter.  “Hello?”

 

“Char, guess what?!  I just scored five tickets to the One Direction concert in New York City!” Leila screamed.

 

My name is Charity, and I’m 16.  My dream is to meet Liam Payne from One Direction.

 

“Oh, my God!  Seriously?!” I screamed back.

 

“Yeah!  I was the ninth caller to the local pop station, and I won tickets!”

 

I shrieked so loud I probably burst Leila’s eardrum.  “That is so amazing!  Liam, here I come!”

 

We talked for a few more minutes about One Direction, and then I hung up.

 

“Who was that?” my older brother Dan asked.  He’s 18 and hates One Direction.

 

“That was Leila!  She just won One Direction tickets!”

 

Dan laughed.  “That gay boy band?!”

 

“They are NOT gay!”

 

“Well, that guy you like is.  He uses pink hair straighteners!”

 

“He is NOT!  Only REAL men use pink things!”

 

Dan laughed again.  “Sure…”

 

~~~~~

 

“Absolutely not!” Daddy barked when I told him about the tickets.

 

“Why not?” I asked.

 

“Well, for one thing, it’s out of state!  I can’t let you go that far!  Also, those boys are like twenty years old!  You’re sixteen!”

 

“No, they’re not!  Louis—“

 

Daddy cut me off.  “I don’t care!”

 

“But it’s only an hour away!”

 

“Did you do your homework?”

 

“No…”

 

“Then you can’t go.  Call your friend Kasey and tell her.  I’m sure someone else would be glad to go.”

 

“I’ll study, I swear!” I pleaded.

 

“And you won’t be late to school?”

 

“I promise!  Please?????”  I put on my puppy dog face.

 

Daddy sighed.  “Alright, you can go.  But you have to do your homework EVERY DAY.”

 

“I will, Daddy!  Thanks!”  I hugged and kissed him.

 

~~~~~

 

“Did your dad say yes?” Leila asked Monday at school.

 

“It’s on like Donkey Kong!” I exclaimed.

 

“What’s on like Donkey Kong?” Jordan Perkins asked.

 

“The One Direction concert!  Daddy let me go!”

 

“That’s awesome!  You can meet Liam now!  Leeeeeeee-yummmmmmmmm!”

 

I blushed and giggled.  I do that every time someone mentions Liam.  “And you can meet Louieeeeee!”


Fave quotes from my concert in Louisville:

It feels great to have me own 'Ville! ~Louis on having a city "named after him" (I'm pretty sure Louisville was named after a different Louis lln)

The three things I love most about Kentucky are: (1) the chicken, (2) the chicken, and (3)...*long pause* ALL OF YOU GUYS! ~Zayn

 

Fave quotes from my concert in Chicago:

Harry *to Caroline, the girl with the broken arm*: How did you fall?

Caroline: I fell funny.

*the crowd laughs*

 

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Posted 22 January 2013 - 01:33 AM

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Posted 22 January 2013 - 02:07 AM

lol :) awesome so far

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Posted 22 January 2013 - 06:46 AM

Luv it.
I <3 all my 1D lovin' BFF's

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Posted 22 January 2013 - 12:15 PM

Luv it

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Posted 22 January 2013 - 03:47 PM

Awesome! Luv it, please continue! This is amazing!

LOUIS WILLIAM TOMLINSON IS THE MOST AMAZAYN BOY ON EARTH!!!! I can't be no superman, but for him I'll be superhuman! Love that song, lol x

"I like girls who eat carrots!"

"NO! Protested Jimmy."

KEVIN!!!!!!!

I'LL LOVE YOU FOREVER 1D!! YOU CHANGED MY LIFE! XXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXX


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Posted 22 January 2013 - 05:08 PM

MOREEE!!!!!!YAY I WON TICKETS!!!!!

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Posted 23 January 2013 - 12:20 AM

Chapter 2

By the time the concert date rolled around, all five of us were stoked. On the night of the concert, I wore my favorite purple turtleneck and jeans.

We left for the concert at about six, since it was at 7:30 and we wanted to find our seats quickly. I blasted the "Take Me Home" yearbook edition the whole way there.

When we got there, there were already tons of girls there. When we were almost to our seats, I was knocked down by someone. This someone had a buzz cut and brown eyes and looked exactly like Liam. He picked me right back up and said, "Oh, sorry, love. I didn't see you there.". He had a British accent! It WAS Liam!

"L-Liam?" I said.

"In person. What's your name, love?"

"Charity."

"That's quite a pretty name. Where are your seats? I'll take you there."

"Okay! But first, I wanna take a picture with you."

"Sure, love."

I gave my phone to Leila, who opened the camera app and aimed the lens at me and Liam. He put his arm around me as she took the picture. When she was done, Liam led us to our seats.

Sorry It's so short. My phone's about to die.

Fave quotes from my concert in Louisville:

It feels great to have me own 'Ville! ~Louis on having a city "named after him" (I'm pretty sure Louisville was named after a different Louis lln)

The three things I love most about Kentucky are: (1) the chicken, (2) the chicken, and (3)...*long pause* ALL OF YOU GUYS! ~Zayn

 

Fave quotes from my concert in Chicago:

Harry *to Caroline, the girl with the broken arm*: How did you fall?

Caroline: I fell funny.

*the crowd laughs*

 

Twitter: @holynandos86

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Posted 23 January 2013 - 12:51 AM

It's good! :P


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Posted 23 January 2013 - 01:39 AM

Its really great

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Posted 23 January 2013 - 01:43 AM

Okay, I'm at my computer again.  When Liam says "I'll take you there", he sings it like in Kiss You. (I'll take you there, take you there, baby I'll take you there, yeah) and Charity giggles at that. lol I forgot to put that in there.

 

Here's the rest of 2.

 

Liam’s POV

 

All through the concert, I couldn’t help but notice Charity singing to all of our songs.  She was jumping around and rocking out to all of them, and she looked sexy doing it.  During “Kiss You”, I decided to point to her while singing my part.  In effect, she screamed, “I love you, Liam!”  She reached out her hand, and I squeezed it tight.

 

~~~~~

 

Charity’s POV

 

The concert was amazing.  The guys sang all my favorite songs, and even some classic ones like “One Thing” and “What Makes You Beautiful”.  Liam even pointed at me during “Kiss You”.  I reached out my hand and he grabbed it.  I could already feel a strong connection between us.

 

Afterwards, the five of us went backstage to meet the guys.  Liam quickly recognized me as “the girl he bumped into before the show”.  I giggled at that remark.

 

“What are your mates’ names, love?” he asked.

 

“These are Leila, Jordan, Sam, and Rachael,” I replied.

 

~~~~~

 

Jordan’s POV

 

I couldn’t take it anymore.  I had to introduce myself to Louis.  “Oh, my God, Louis!  I love you SOOOOOOOO much!!!” I screamed, remembering not to scream in his face, because they don’t like that.  I ran over to him and gave him a big hug.

 

Louis laughed.  “I love you, too!  We love all our fans,” he said.  “What’s your name?”

 

“Jordan.”

 

“Want a carrot?”

 

“Uh…sure!”  I giggled, thinking Louis was kidding.  But no, he wasn’t.  He went to a secret stash and pulled out a carrot for me.

 

~~~~~

 

Leila’s POV

 

Niall looked so hot in his blue sweater.  It really brought out his blue eyes.  “Hi,” I said shyly.

 

“Hello,” he said, smiling.  And he had an amazing smile and accent.  “What’s your name?”

 

“Leila.”

 

“That’s a beautiful name.”

 

“Thanks.”

 

~~~~~

 

Charity’s POV

 

“Would you girls like to come to London with us?” Liam asked.

 

“No, I can’t,” I said.  “My dad would never let me.”

 

All the other girls nodded in agreement.

 

“We’d really love to have you,” Zayn said.  “Why don’t you give your dad a call?”

 

“Alright, but he’ll just say no.”  I pulled out my cell and called Daddy.


Fave quotes from my concert in Louisville:

It feels great to have me own 'Ville! ~Louis on having a city "named after him" (I'm pretty sure Louisville was named after a different Louis lln)

The three things I love most about Kentucky are: (1) the chicken, (2) the chicken, and (3)...*long pause* ALL OF YOU GUYS! ~Zayn

 

Fave quotes from my concert in Chicago:

Harry *to Caroline, the girl with the broken arm*: How did you fall?

Caroline: I fell funny.

*the crowd laughs*

 

Twitter: @holynandos86

Wattpad: HolyNandosItsSteph

Kik: StiallWoran86

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Posted 23 January 2013 - 01:49 AM

Ohhhh cliffhanger much grrr

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Posted 23 January 2013 - 01:50 AM

muahahahahaha lol


Fave quotes from my concert in Louisville:

It feels great to have me own 'Ville! ~Louis on having a city "named after him" (I'm pretty sure Louisville was named after a different Louis lln)

The three things I love most about Kentucky are: (1) the chicken, (2) the chicken, and (3)...*long pause* ALL OF YOU GUYS! ~Zayn

 

Fave quotes from my concert in Chicago:

Harry *to Caroline, the girl with the broken arm*: How did you fall?

Caroline: I fell funny.

*the crowd laughs*

 

Twitter: @holynandos86

Wattpad: HolyNandosItsSteph

Kik: StiallWoran86

Movellas: StephanieHoran86

 

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Posted 23 January 2013 - 01:50 AM

Hahahaaa!!!


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Posted 23 January 2013 - 03:13 AM

NOOOOOO!!! Post more please! *bates eyelashes and bites into a carrot* haha! :)

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Posted 23 January 2013 - 07:36 PM

haha Tyler...

 

Chapter 3

 

Dan answered the phone.  “Hello?”

 

“Hey, Dan.  Can I talk to Daddy?” I asked.

 

“Sure, hold on.”  Dan put down the phone, and Daddy’s voice came on a little bit later.

 

“Hello?”

 

“Hey, it’s me.  The guys asked me and my friends if we wanted to go to London.  Would you let me?”

 

“No, I’m afraid you can’t.  You’re still in high school, sweetie.”

 

“I know, but this is the opportunity of a LIFETIME!”

 

Daddy sighed.  “Well, how long would you be there?”

 

I pulled the phone away from my ear and repeated the question to Liam.

 

“It’s just for one show,” Liam replied.

 

“Just for one show, Daddy!” I said into the phone.  “Please, please, please, please, please???”

 

“Well…okay, but if you come back pregnant, you’re dead.”

 

“Thanks, Daddy!”  I hung up.  “He said yes!”

 

“Brilliant!” Liam said.  “We leave next week.”

 

~~~~~

 

Over the next week, my friends and I applied for passports.  All except Sam.

 

“Why didn’t you get a passport?” I asked on Monday.  “They leave on Saturday!”

 

“Well, I’m in the same predicament as you,” she said.  “My mom won’t let me go.”

 

“Well, that sucks!  You know what?  Just sneak out.”

 

“I can’t do that!  We have a guard dog!”

 

Sam’s house had been broken into last year, and she was almost raped, so they got a German shepherd.

 

“Sneak out the front, distract your dog, and meet me at my car.”

 

Sam paused for a moment.  “Okay.  I hope this will work.”

 

“Dogs are easily distracted.”

 

Sam giggled.  “That’s true.  Zayn, here I come!”

 

~~~~~

 

Sam’s POV

 

On Saturday, I did as Charity told me to.  I grabbed one of Killer’s favorite chew toys, snuck out the door, gave it to him, and went to meet Charity at her car.  The plan worked!  Killer can chew on a toy forever and not be distracted.  That’s his only weakness.

 

I climbed in the back with the other girls.  “Hey, I told you it would work!” Charity said.  “Ready to go?”

 

“More than ever!”

 

~~~~~

 

Charity’s POV

 

When we got to the airport, the guys were already there.  We checked in our bags and joined them at the gate.

 

“Hello, loves,” Liam said.  “Ready for London?”

 

“We sure are!” I said.

 

~~~~~

 

Rachael’s POV

 

“Wake up, Rach.  We’re here,” I heard Harry say as I was sleeping on the plane.  I opened my eyes to see him staring me in the face.  I looked outside; it was snowing!

 

“Oh, sweet!  Snow!” I said.

 

Harry laughed.  “Yeah, we get that a lot in England.  That and rain.”  Harry unbuckled my seatbelt and helped me up.


Fave quotes from my concert in Louisville:

It feels great to have me own 'Ville! ~Louis on having a city "named after him" (I'm pretty sure Louisville was named after a different Louis lln)

The three things I love most about Kentucky are: (1) the chicken, (2) the chicken, and (3)...*long pause* ALL OF YOU GUYS! ~Zayn

 

Fave quotes from my concert in Chicago:

Harry *to Caroline, the girl with the broken arm*: How did you fall?

Caroline: I fell funny.

*the crowd laughs*

 

Twitter: @holynandos86

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Posted 23 January 2013 - 08:57 PM

Ohhh luv it

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Posted 24 January 2013 - 12:53 AM

SEXUAL LANGUAGE WARNING!  READ AT YOUR OWN RISK! lol

 

Chapter 4

 

Charity’s POV

 

By the time we got to London, it was dinnertime, and of course Niall was hungry.  “Let’s go to Nando’s!” he suggested.

 

“Niall, you always wanna go to Nando’s!” Zayn said.  “How about McDonald’s?”

 

“We’re not going somewhere cheap!  Not when we have five beautiful ladies with us!”

 

Zayn sighed.  “Good point.”

 

“What’s Nando’s?” I asked.

 

“It’s a chicken place,” Niall replied.  “It’s really popular in England.”

 

“Oh, I love chicken!”

 

“Who doesn’t?”

 

We all piled into Louis’ car, which had been in the parking lot since they left for America, and went to the nearest Nando’s.  By the time we got there, my stomach was growling so loud, everyone noticed.

 

“Looks like somebody’s hungry,” Liam teased.  “Either that, or we’re being chased by a bear.”

 

I giggled.  “Oh, Liam, you’re so funny!”

 

The guys let us girls go in first, and as soon as they walked in, a mob of screaming girls ran up to them.

 

“OMG Liam!” one of them screamed.

 

“Hey, don’t scream in his face!  He doesn’t like that,” I said.

 

The girl giggled.  “Sorry.”

 

“This girl you’re with is SOOOOO cute!” another girl complimented to Liam.  “What’s her name?”

 

“My name’s Charity,” I replied.

 

“That’s a cute name!”
 

“Thanks.”

 

After a few minutes of signing autographs and taking pictures, the girls went about their own business and we were able to go order our food.

 

As soon as we sat down with our food, which the guys offered to pay for, I heard a girl screaming Liam’s name.  I just brushed it off as another crazy fan until she came to our table.  “Oh…who’s this bloke?” she asked disappointedly.

 

“Julianna, this is Charity.  I met her at a concert in New York City,” Liam said.  “Why do you care, anyways?  We broke up, remember?”

 

“Yeah, but I’m still not over you!  Please come back!”

 

“No!  You’re a cheater and a scumbag!”

 

“Hmph!”  Julianna turned on her heels and stormed out.

 

“What was that?” I asked, confused.

 

“Just an ex of mine,” Liam answered.

 

~~~~~

 

By the time we got to the hotel, it was 9 pm, so we all checked in and went to bed.  Niall and Leila were to share a room with me and Liam; Harry, Rachael, Louis, and Jordan had the next room; and Zayn and Sam were in another room.

 

As Liam got undressed, I could see how incredibly sexy he was.  I was turned on just looking at him.

 

“Are you okay, love?” Liam asked when he saw me standing there.

 

“Yeah, I’m fine…it’s…just…” I trailed off.  I proceeded to go to the bathroom, get undressed myself and put on my nightgown.

 

~~~~~

 

Liam’s POV

 

When Charity came back out of the bathroom, she was wearing the sexiest nightgown I’d ever seen.  It was frilly and pink.  I had to get inside her; she looked so FIT!

 

~~~~~

 

Charity’s POV

 

I was about to climb into bed when I noticed something sticking out of the crotch of Liam’s pajama pants.  His penis!  “Um, Liam…your penis is sticking out,” I said.

 

Liam chuckled.  “I know.  Don’t worry, I brought condoms just in case.”

 

“Good.”  I invited him to get on top of me, and he obliged.  We took each other’s clothes off and started to make out.

 

Just as we were starting to get intimate, I heard Niall clear his throat.  I looked up to see him staring at us.  “What?” Liam and I asked.

 

“Liam, she’s sixteen!  She’s illegal!” Niall said.

 

“So?  She was the one who wanted to do it,” Liam said.

 

“Alright, but if you go to jail for statutory rape, I’m not bailing you out.”

 

Liam and I continued to have wild sex and make out.


Fave quotes from my concert in Louisville:

It feels great to have me own 'Ville! ~Louis on having a city "named after him" (I'm pretty sure Louisville was named after a different Louis lln)

The three things I love most about Kentucky are: (1) the chicken, (2) the chicken, and (3)...*long pause* ALL OF YOU GUYS! ~Zayn

 

Fave quotes from my concert in Chicago:

Harry *to Caroline, the girl with the broken arm*: How did you fall?

Caroline: I fell funny.

*the crowd laughs*

 

Twitter: @holynandos86

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Kik: StiallWoran86

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Posted 24 January 2013 - 01:29 AM

Lol but y am i the bad guy lol and on my birthday lol mhhh lol jk i luv this plz countinue and watch her get pregnant lol

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Posted 24 January 2013 - 03:07 AM

sorryyyyyyyyyyyy lol


Fave quotes from my concert in Louisville:

It feels great to have me own 'Ville! ~Louis on having a city "named after him" (I'm pretty sure Louisville was named after a different Louis lln)

The three things I love most about Kentucky are: (1) the chicken, (2) the chicken, and (3)...*long pause* ALL OF YOU GUYS! ~Zayn

 

Fave quotes from my concert in Chicago:

Harry *to Caroline, the girl with the broken arm*: How did you fall?

Caroline: I fell funny.

*the crowd laughs*

 

Twitter: @holynandos86

Wattpad: HolyNandosItsSteph

Kik: StiallWoran86

Movellas: StephanieHoran86

 

Check out my 5SOS forums!



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