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Posted 20 January 2013 - 07:43 PM

Lol of corse

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Posted 20 January 2013 - 07:44 PM

Lol
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Posted 20 January 2013 - 07:48 PM

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Posted 20 January 2013 - 10:39 PM

Chapter 2

As the girls looked up they saw a older man in t shirt and jeans. Julianna looked puzzle what hotel there's lots around here, jordon giggled. The man looked hurried..."ummmm the Hilton...I am driving very specile guests to there"
"ohhhh it's on 15th avenue"
"thank you" the man replyed.
"wait" jordon yelled out
The man turned around "what?"
"umm who are you driving"
" can't say.... It's out of respect for them"
The girls got a grin on Thier face "ok" they said in unison. Once the black bus was turned down the street. Jordon asked julianna "you thinking what I am thinking of"
" yep"
"follow that man" they said in unison

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Posted 21 January 2013 - 04:51 AM

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Posted 21 January 2013 - 07:45 AM

I love it just it's Jordan not jordon.
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Posted 21 January 2013 - 10:07 AM

I AM BACK!!! LOL i got my phone taken off me and i wasnt allowed to use the internet. I AM NOT AT SCHOOL BECAUSE ITS SNOWY!!!!!!

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Posted 22 January 2013 - 02:06 AM

The girls grabbed Thier bikes and set out to follow the bus. The girls reached the hotel and the bus was Parked. It was dark out at this point. They saw the doors of the bus start to open the hid behind a Dumpser. The first shaddow was walking out of the bus first they saw a boy/man that looked like Liam. Jordan whispered "is that who I think it is"
Juliannas eyes widened "holy crap it is"
The girls hushed down when they heard talking.
The rest of the boys exited out of the bus. As Louis stepped out of the bus he said "this is wiered no snow at Christmas" Harry stated "well yeah it's LA" the rest of the boy laghed yeah.
The girls looked at each other with smiles.

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Posted 22 January 2013 - 02:11 AM

Oooooh.... :)


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Posted 22 January 2013 - 02:24 AM

What was it bad I had writers block

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Posted 22 January 2013 - 06:36 AM

No. Just to let u no I like Louis and Julianna likes Liam
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Posted 22 January 2013 - 09:06 PM

can i be in it plz?? i like nialler!!

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Posted 23 January 2013 - 12:03 AM

Pengi can nialler be in it

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Posted 23 January 2013 - 12:56 AM

Chapter 4

Right before the boys went inside there was a big crash. The boys jumped in fear and truned to the noise there was a bumpter on the ground and 2 young girls sitting there looking embarrassed and waving tiny waves. The boys looked at Jordan and Julianna and gave a half smile and waved.

The girls stood all the way up and finnaly Julianna spoke up

"did we scare you" she chuckled
Liam stared "well I guess.....kinda"
Louis busted out "why were you hiding behind a dumpster"
Julianna answered "well it's not like it was our first choice we met your driver and he didn't tell us who he was driving.... And we were curious"
Harry laughed "ohhhh we thought u stalked us HAHAHA"
Jordan gave a chukle "nooo corse not"
The boys looked at each other "great what are your names"
"Jordan" she answered
"Julianna" she smiled "what are your names" jordan giggled at her friends question.
The boys laughed.
" are winters always like this here" Niall asked
Julianna answered " yeah pretty much"
Liam asked Julianna "how old are you girls"
"12" they said in unison
Louis looked stund " you girls are really confident for how young u are"
The girls giggled "thanks"

Harry finally asked "do you girls want to eat dinner with us"
They tried to seem cool and not so fan girlly " shure"

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Posted 23 January 2013 - 12:57 AM

Sorry if I got the ages wrong you can just correct me

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Posted 23 January 2013 - 12:59 AM

Oooooooh. :)


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Posted 23 January 2013 - 01:01 AM

Yeahh stop saying that I know it's not my best work lol

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Posted 23 January 2013 - 01:37 AM

Luv it

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Posted 23 January 2013 - 01:38 AM

But were actually older in the story if u remember the first chapter

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Posted 23 January 2013 - 06:57 AM

Nialler u can be in it. HAPPY BIRTHDAY JULIANNA
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